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jeet01

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  1. jeet01

    Shield

    mahabharata is one of my fav novels,one of the jewels of my childhood.I would love to see what you can do in the background of this epic saga.I need more.....
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    I Love You

    its amazing the way u can write a bright happy chapter and a gloomy sad chapter so accurately....and and i love alisha now dont kill me....jokes apart...please make them happy
  3. I like it.....this is really a nice chapter.Now finally something will happen between Ed and June.And Carol is now bisexual Though I am still curious when we will see the villains again......
  4. Hi kkkkk i mean sacred its a good chapter to read.Its nice relaxing..life can be good like this.After all the dark things happend ti June finally he is in his happy way.And yes....They ARE boyfriends....come on.And looking at other reviews...gosh...they can type that lengthy??????
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    Christmas Surprise

    Good god u r back with this amazing story.....i like the way you describe this fantasy world where corporations controls everything....its really feel like future reflection of todays world. its a all over happy chapter.I am sure there will be future devolopment with Kims father.I just want to see Kim and Raeden fighting side by side against this evil corps
  6. This is the only zombie story i hav read so far....this should be a movie....there i said it.and i dont want to cry for new chapters he he he
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    Christmas in Zonei

    I dont really know what to say.....this genre of stories...new to me....its amazing the way you write this...i can visualize it....perfect...something out of the ordinary...something new and fresh...i love it
  8. First of all i want to congratulate you for this amazing chapter......i wonder how much time and effort it takes to give us this....you are right...i have to write atleast one review for this.You make me sad......it happens like this in real life...but you have the option to make it much more hapyy in fantacy.Such in depth writing....you certainly gearing up the standard.Now you have to work harder then ever to make this worthy for us lol.And i think i know what are you planning to do with Carol and Michelle
  9. Ok so i have to write this.....right?....when i started reading this story......i thought it will be another romance story with lots of drama and tears and emotions......not much surprising at all......BUT you prove me wrong......the surprise came at chapter 13......you changed my whole outlook to this story....and i am happy for that.The strong powerful way of writing which can potray so much sadness...reality.....trazedy...i ahve no words for that.Hats off to you Sacredlove for that.
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    Once Upon A Time

    I want a sequel..... pretty please...............................................................
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    Big Changes

    nice,very very interesting....
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    Life After Death

    I have no words to describe it ,you are an amazing writer with a rare ability to write something unique,something without any stereotype.I have read all of your stories,each of them is unique,something i have never read before. So engaging. This story is no different.I thought it will be one of the horror genre but again you surprised me.
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    My Wedding Vows

    I dont know what else to say beside its beautiful.You are so lucky,both of you.We heard all about soul mate in stories,fantasies.But its hard to find your soul mate,even harder for gay people.some people never find their soul mate in their entire life.You two are still together,that is the best thing.good wishes for your future.
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    A Servant's duty

    its beautiful!i llike the ending most of all.servant and master two lovers.great story!
  15. Finally Jason and Peter sort out things together.I feared you will make it a tragedy.Amezing story ending,i love it.
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    Chapter 1

    Yes, a short but excellent story.What can i say? people reviewed here said it all.I feel like you are writing my story.I can very much relate to the fact of being alone in a crowd.This character is so much like me.He is talking when no one can hear him.I agree with all the other people."We've all been there, in a certain way".Intense writing.deep thought.Though i dont agree with the end.Life changes and its worth to live.Never be so disappointed.
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