I have my editor. More like if something seems so glaring it takes the reader out of my story I want to know about it. The thing I forgot to consider was the person who read my chapter also can't cook at all. Burns water. lol. So without stopping to think about who the reader was I just wanted to make sure Charlie and I weren't the only ones who ran to our coping responses when things went wrong.
The knit what? If they knit in your pockets that means they have knitting needles, and you let them get that close to your ......? Wow. No further comment just WOW!
It rings a little too close to home. Your life is bleeding into your poetry. I hope you realize that the end you see is most likely the true one. For why would he say you are to go to hell for loving and being true?
If you are offering yourself up in prayer listen to the reply. Moving poem and while I sense your loneliness and how scared you are, remember that unless you are willing to let yourself get hurt you won't be able to move forward and find love. Strong piece.
I am glad you are enjoying the story. Hard at work on the next chapter now. One thing you know is Charlie takes life at his own pace. He is a stand up sort of guy.
Things happen as they happen. Charlie's whole story has taken place in three days so far. The poor guy has been through a lot. I don't know what you mean? Mr. Blue Eyes? lol. Give Charlie a chance. Time will tell what happens.
Frosty I just meant Charlie was crying at the end of the chapter. Cia is hoping I toss him right into Reeds' bed. Like I would do such a thing. Charlie has things to learn yet. Time will tell.
Thank you. Sometimes the best things come not from your imagination but from your own life. Glad you found it to be worth the read. Thanks for the kind comments.
My dear Cia would you allow Charlie to cry? I mean he did just end a relationship of nearly two years. I never promised things would be smooth or how you expected. Just going to have to wait.
Cia, To be honest it is like the talk to me. Sometimes I feel the story should be going one way but either one character or another seems to get into a huff for trying to make them go contrary to who they are. Eventually I have no choice but to go where they want to take me.
Cia, I never worry if someone does one chapter at a time or saves them up and goes all at once. I am just grateful people seem to be enjoying it and commenting on it as well.
Well glad it all is making sense. I know things need to be explained and sometimes allowing Charlie to show you is a lot easier. Memory can be a wonderful thing. Thanks for the comments.
Nephy, thank you for reading and more importantly commenting. I hope as the story progresses it all makes sense. Nothing in life is without its reasons.
I think that is the point though. The future at any age is an unknown. What you do and how you do it will make your future brighter or darker. It is almost always up to you. Thank you for reading and commenting on my work Jian. It means a lot to me.
I'm glad you understood the hollow smiling man. I was afraid it might have been lost in translation. Thank you for all your comments and for keeping me honest with this Maria.
Well I think everyone tries to hide after being hurt. It is just when someone reminds that life is worth living that we are able to admit love still exists. Thank you for reading.