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  1. rustle

    Fairview

    Strange to see a comment on this story after all this time. Thanks. It's been a while since I wrote it, but I still remember the chills it gave me. Figured if I could creep myself out...
  2. College was so much easier the 1st time. No Internet distractions.  Only cute boys in the the Library. LOL 😁 

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    2. K.C.

      K.C.

      Yep! Going for my Bachelor's

    3. rustle

      rustle

      I thought you already had that.

    4. K.C.

      K.C.

      Not finished. I've taken a lot of classes towards it over the years, but haven't completed. 

  3. Man you need to learn to close those blinds...(((Extend long range telescope))) 😎

  4. Dude! I've been stalking you, trying to catch ya online! 😜

    1. Carlos Hazday

      Carlos Hazday

      So am I! LOL

      Married yet?

  5. got the wedding license this morning

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    2. Defiance19

      Defiance19

      Congratulations!

    3. Daddydavek

      Daddydavek

      Best Wishes to both of you!

    4. K.C.

      K.C.

      OMG! Dude!!! Congratulations!!! 😄

  6. fresh dewberry cobbler

  7. Dave and I are getting married. If you're in Taos on 6/27, you can buy us a drink.

    After all this time, he finally proposed, or I'd be trying forever to find the words to propose to him.

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    2. Ron

      Ron

      Congratulations!

    3. Daddydavek

      Daddydavek

      Congratulations!  

    4. Valkyrie

      Valkyrie

      Congratulations :D  

  8. KD just posted chapter 25, and I've got to say, I really enjoyed it. I've written before about how rewarding it is to work with an author and see their work evolve. This is a prime example. If you follow this story, you'll see what I mean. If you haven't read any of it before, now is a good time to start. Congrats, KD, you done good. I look forward to reading more of your work.
  9. Almost there. Paper Walls is coming back soon with edits. This is a big chapter, in a lot of ways. Great work.

  10. Harvey destroyed a section of my fence last night. Guess what I'm doing later. Fencing. In the rain.

    1. Daddydavek

      Daddydavek

      Keep safe! 

       

      With the dog, a fence is a necessity, especially in the rain....

    2. SolarMaxx

      SolarMaxx

      My heart is with you, and everyone else who falls victim to that storm! Just watching it on the news is a nightmare. Can't imagine having the experience! :hug:

    3. rustle

      rustle

      My damage is insignificant. It's an old fence, ripe for replacement. Many, many people are worse off.

  11. Dude, I coulda told you that would be your result. Have you considered trying to fit the stereotype better? Maybe buy a Judy Garland album or something?
  12. At 99, no discovery is easy. But with age has come the self-awareness that renders this "test" a lark.
  13. Very gay. I'm shocked. Shocked, I tell you.
  14. rustle

    Chapter 24

    There's a lot to like in this chapter. You started with good bones, but you fleshed it all out very well. Again, you went well beyond any suggestions I made, and your technique, especially on the last rewrite, was great, and smoothed out the chapter beautifully. I loved the internal dialogue from Ryder and the narrative when he and Tyler were texting, and the physicality he showed when he straddled Tyler on his bed. It helps put Ryder in context. He's a jock, so he's gonna be physical. The play between the two guys is really true to character, and makes me smile. Good character development on Mrs. K, and Coach's presence is pitched well. As for Jaxson, I just want to take him home with me, but he'd drive me nuts. Your writing has come a long way on this story. Tremendous effort, bud, great job.
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