K.C.

Wow- aren't you a cutie!!!

You know that you are beautiful! Love ya, Girl

You kept saying you were going to join! I'm glad to see you here, I hope you like it! If you have any questions just give me a shout, you know how to reach me. Think you'll like it, everyone is pretty friendly.

Thank you, Dannsar, so much for the review. This story started out as a gift for my young daughter. She didn’t understand why she couldn’t read anything I wrote. We sat down and she came up with the names of the main characters and I wanted her approval for storyline.I really felt that I was going out on a limb sharing this story with GA. It is a true Young Adult Novel with a strong female lead character. I’m honored that it has gotten such a warm reception. Trying to mix fantasy with reality to make a good story is hard. The underwater world, unique creatures and a touch of young romance has made this a hit with my kid and her friends. Her teacher even let her do a book-report on this story this past school year, which had me over the moon! Thanks again for reading, I’m glad you liked it.

Your words always touch me and make me think. We are better people for you sharing your thoughts with us! Thanks Bob. Thinking of you often!

Wow- I had an uneasy feeling where this was going, but it was such a touching story. Love lost before it can fully blossom. Tragic but Amazing! Hope it has no real life symbolic meaning, that would be just too much

There was a lot of talent in the contest. I'm glad to be part of it and that you enjoyed the story. Thank you

Thank you. It's a diffent story but I hope it was still a good read. Thanks for the comment.

Haha- I didnt think about it until I replied to the other stories- Some people knew I submitted a story so I would be a big read arrow at which one was mine with the missing comment

I'm glad that it kept you till the end. I would hate to lose my reader half way It means a lot that you took time to read it. Thanks!

Thanks JC for reading. I'm glad you like it. I know it's a little differnt for the GA crowd but glad you read it

You know I was just talking about that the other day. I live at one of the most beautiful places on earth, but when do we enjoy it? Rush about our days with work, school, family stuff but don’t enjoy it or share it. Last week my daughter and I made a list of all the local things we want to go do and see and we are going to get started on them. Maybe we’ll post our own photos too! Thanks for the inspiration.

Thanks Charlieocho. Sorry that I'm a little late replying. This was the most difficult poem I've ever written. I'm glad you read it.

I really love the Wagner's Holiday! They are an awesome family. Scott was so warmly welcome. It was beautiful BUT...Ok...Wayne...I'm a little guy and I think it would be difficult for someone to carry me (asleep--aka dead weight) inside and put me to bed. It was sweet and touching but makes Charlie almost too childlike. Maybe helping him inside, leaning into the warmth of Scott's body? Tired eyes flutter? IMO Great Chapter- I want more! Write very fast!

The kiss at the movies was perfect. Charlie was awkward staring at his feet but not uncomfortable and glancing around at who else is watching- I like that! Scott and Charlie's kiss had me all fluttery!

The kiss at the movies was perfect. Charlie was awkward staring at his feet but not uncomfortable and glancing around at who else is watching- I like that! Scott and Charlie's kiss had me all fluttery!

Such an emotional chapter for both Charlie and Tina. Always sad to see a relationship outlive the romance. It fizzles and dies But It had to end to start a new beginning. Hope good things are coming Charlie's way

Mehh- losing interest- don't know if I'll continue reading...JK! Charlie has a lot to think about. What is he going to do about Tina? It's obvious he loves her but is not IN LOVE with her...tough one! Nice chappy Wayne!

Okay the Ben/Wade & Rick Jr drama- the Rick Jr & Rick Sr. drama is over to BACK to Scott and Charlie!!!

Jeez, you know how to keep a guy on the edge of their seat.

Charles in Charge! Way to go Charlie. Must read faster...

OMG! OMG! OMG! This has to be the best chapter ever! I love Rick Jr so nonchalant: "who's naked dude in your bed?" OMG However, I would have rather it been Scott but the kiss was great. Charlie's reaction was brilliant.

Charlie started the accidents but now everyone else's train-wreck of lives is crashing down on him No fair! So much in such a short chapter...write faster! Write longer!

Head hops are hard- well done. Nice to see the same scenario through Scott's pov.