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Great chapter!!! I love JP and Stefan riding to the rescue. I was waiting for the whole Hendrickson parental card to play out it's the sign of a talented author when they pull items like that out of their story to bring things together. I really like when Stef changes to his business persona and uses his money and power to influence and achieve good. In that regard I miss hearing about the shelter and the kids there and though perhaps this is not the point to say it I miss some of the other Mark Arbour characters I have gotten to love like Matt, Wade and Cody hope to see them come back into the story soon.
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As always with a Mark Arbour story I throughly enjoyed the chapter. I am liking how Will is developing and also Gathan and Kristin. I would prefer if each chapter dealt only with one character group as I find when I am getting into what is happening with that character it changes to the other. Regarding Brad's reaction I can see him dealing with things as he did and am taking it as a sign of him dealing with Will as he transitions into more of an adult. I also think he would see things as a result of what went on in Paris. Frankly after almost loosing your child because of enemies from your own past a parent would be hard pressed to be mad at them for anything.
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...At the end of the day, I only had myself to blame.
Torontotop commented on Jwolf's story chapter in ...At the end of the day, I only had myself to blame.
I really liked this chapter and I at the risk of sounding like an idiot I will say it, I like Chase and want them to end up together. Chase needs to beg and do some real ass kissing and explaning before that can happen. Hitting or punching someone is major, and is and should be hard to come back from that coupled with lying about being married is huge. So if they are to end up together he needs to explain all that happened how he ruined his life and how him and Coop are meant to be together and he then needs to do some huge romantic gesture. Could make for lots of drama and an interesting story. -
I love Mark Arbours writing and this chapter. I eagerly wait for the next posting and find myself checking for one each day. I just reread from Berad on so far to bloodlines to avoid Arbour withdrawl
