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Great chapter as always. Mark thanks for all your effort in keeping the chapters coming regularly. I am wondering if Travis has made a will and who inherits if he dies? Would or could his Mother benefit from any of this?

So happy to have Wade and Matt back, hopefully that signals less of the one whose name starts with the letter J 😉 Hope you enjoyed your cruise Mark!

I am really tired of Jay, or whatever he is calling himself today. More and more I find him an unwelcome interruption to hearing about Will. Your writing as always is excellent. Enjoy the cruise!

Great read as always. I like that Travis had Zach's truck torched, shows he has some balls and gumption. No doubt he will need that in the future.

Excellent chapter as always! You tackled the important topic of abuse well coupled with the need for lines that can't be crossed in a relationship. Pointing out that abuse does and should result in the destruction of trust is a key point for readers to be aware of. Without trust there really is no good relationship possible, too many ignore this and make excuses for their abuser. I wondered if Zach doesn't have some stressors such as steroid use, drugs, the Bucks and, or something else. That said no matter what the issue abuse must and should not be tolerated. I am happy to see Will and Zach break up. The relationship has become too one sided. It would be nice to see Will with someone new who can be more supportive and is more of an equal. There is a natural evolution of relationships and peoples needs as they transition to different stages of their lives. High School to University is a major transition that often leads to changes and a new circle of friends and lovers who are more involved in each others daily lives and have shared experiences and friends.

Enjoyable chapter as always. It is so nice to have you posting again. Luka Brazzi - interesting choice of name. I hope that doesn't mean he will end up laying with the fishes

It was so nice to sign on and see a new chapter. Thanks for getting back to this saga which we all love. I hope things are good with you and look forward to future chapters especially focussed on Will.

I love CAP and your writing and am really missing my weekly (or sometimes even bi-weekly) fix. Any idea when we can expect a new chapter?

Great chapter a beautiful ending to Robbie’s story and a beautiful chapter thank you Mark. Now as you seem to have forgotten I will remind you again, stop fucking making me cry! Also the chapter was too short and sorry, song lyrics don’t count towards length, even though they totally worked so I think you have to get the next chapter out really quick as you have left me seriously needing more, not that that’s unusual with your stories.

Wow, another great chapter, kudos to you and your team! That said, I thought I told you to stop making me cry, that's four chapters in a row. I now make sure I have a box of Kleenex nearby before I start reading. It has been nice to hear from Brad and of course great to have Wade and Matt back in the story. Thanks for the quick turn around on chapters and your excellent writing.

Fabulous chapter as usual, but can you please stop making me cry! Thanks for doing such a great job it really takes you back and mirrors the emotions many of us went through during the time of the attack. It is really great that the chapters are coming out so quickly the quick pace makes the story even more enjoyable, frankly I don't know how you do it but please keep it up.

I like the Christmas analogy that Tim makes above it seems quite apt. Thanks Mark for another great chapter, I too wait with baited breath for each installment and always feel my day is a little brighter if there is a new CAP posting. Even though Will has them where he wants them I think he should stress the investment opportunity, the value and what the property will be worth once finished, that it can be sold at a considerable profit or rented out if they decide not to keep it and lastly that he was careful enough to structure the deal to only risk the ten thousand earnest money and did that to give them time to come so he could get the benefit of their expertise.

Hope you had or are having a great trip! Not sure what parts of Asia you are in but China and Hong Kong are favorite places of mine. That said I am beginning to go through CAP withdrawal any idea of when the next chapter of 9.11 will be posted we are all waiting to hear what happens on the float trip.

An excellent chapter I think the Viceroy's offer is a great one, a sure thing, guarantees no loss of life and is a good compromise between gentleman. No doubt restocking the ships or making supplies available is part of the arrangement as it would now be in the Viceroy's interest; all in all it seems a great deal for gentleman and one that should appeal to Granger's sense of proper conduct. I have been missing my Mark Arbour fix and am wondering when you will start the next story of CAP?