gabriel_salinas

Ok Mr. ADD. Next post is when? (Cracking whip in the background) Interesting twist with familial obligations. Wonder if you'll have Daniel be transparent about that I've seen the comments about skyler and wonder what else needs explaining. LOL a teenager lost control of their hormones even while trying to help ? The horror. I do wonder though is if it is Skylers conniving, Daniel's been all hes ever wanted , and up until the kissing incident had always been the lead. This is sweet, and I love and adore the gift you have with wordplay in all your writings. And, next post is when, again (cracking whip). 🤣

Hint pretend anti boyfriend... ok not as much as a subtle hint but a full on drag by four towtrucks demand. Dead story?

Good God you're back!!! You're back!!! Thank you for the money savings, the merc shopping to track you down would've been fudicially depleting. Ijs. And updates! Right now you've moved up on the list slightly above vodka, temporarily, of course, as I will most likely complain about the update times. My ADD addled mind is luckily easily placated. Cant wait to catch up. Did I say thanks? 😁

You are simply put so frigging great at this. XD I am frustrated with you in the best possible way. I always find myself thinking I am going to ignore your stories for a few weeks so I can get a huge dose of your literary crack when it may be a complete work. I never follow through with that. :-/ So here again with so many twists. Commom themes but so well layered, in love with the "straight" man, deciding to love the one who loves you not the one you love. I dont even know which one you will follow with and that of course has me waiting, again, week by week. :-/ The Chu situation, ummm, more will happen? Right? Well next week I guess. LOL the ringing you will be hearing in your ears is my b*% $@!&g as I check daily for you next update. Take care and thank you.

So you are back... Ummm wow what you have done with Corbin. It's funny to have seen it from the outside, the times I have had to do what I have had to do no matter how horrid an ass I would come off as, knowing the impression that everyone would be left with believing that it is so easy to umm be aggressive. If this is really autobio kudos on your resilience. If it is fiction, fantastic job on keeping the character human and making us think of all the shades of gray that we dont always see. Lol your writings been missed, do it again and hell hounds are on call. Just saying. XD

Beautiful, and so direct. Even without so much introduction and history it tells everything about how easy it is for someone to misinterpret so much and how easy it is to mistake the comfort of another person with intimacy. It was sad but at the same time so reminiscent of missed opportunities that i think we all could relate to. I see it reads as complete but really I do wish you could continue this because it really is a great jump off point. Thank you

Not that i want you to but is it possible for you to write anything i hate lol

LOL I know its wrong of me totally wrong but I so want this Jake thing not to be cool and Caleb move on with new people. But yet I am still awaiting the next chapter and still an addict. Love this story and wondering if all things will be amended or if the losses will be cut and yet I am still not entirely sure which I want more and which will piss me off when you deliver them. I hope you are happy with the angst you are causing here lol. And of course i will have to give you the the usual spiel of all authors with WIP deliver them faster!!!! Haha Thank you.

Ok so like seriously since maybe the sky (which i have read like a ton of times ) I have been on the border of stalking you lol. You so didn't fail to deliver. thank you for the goods! LOL

Seriously can you do depressing?!? J/K i have read this like 14 times since like chapter 3 re-reading it every time you update so I wont get lost... OK stalker time more chapters less time LOL. It's sweet and your characters are real and you add the right amount of ugly and untimely to the romance i was a bit confused when you threw in CJ but it's good very good. Thanks for the smileys of the day.

Oh but to understand what a writer thinks is a good read is something that would destroy every single story ever read what would be the point if there weren't surprises and layers of plots within the the story. And yes every story having a happy ending well though always nice isn't always a good read, that said you broke my heart in a good way, i guess. with every pain there is that moment of hope that it wasn't as you saw it,or heard it, or understood it, for the mere sake of saving yourself the real pain. inevitably at the end there is that realization that it is what it is and you caught that moment so well. and though i am disappointed your writing is good and i will follow it knowing you are of course right in your own story because if i wanted an other i would have written myself. I can hardly wait for the next chapter. thank you