It is the narrator who controls the story. S/he chose what we know about Headstone and Ryan. I find myself more and more interested in them. I want to argue with them, which is strange for me. Who argues with the narrator of a fictional story?
If this is an official project, do the authorities frown upon their occasional approval with 'the old ways'? So many questions still unanswered.
I second Thorn and Sasha, but I can understand why he asked. We help each other out here on GA with editing, betaing and in general talking about ideas we have. So for a first try it might be okay, if he'd asked nicely.
Anyway now you know where to go Scotty.
Shouldn't you say 'I will be forever thankful and of course I will mention you in the credits, I might even throw myself at your feet'?
Just kidding, but honestly Scotty you might want to rephrase the above again if you want someone to draw/shop you a cover otherwise you might have to use the face or just the title.