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The bond between Kei and Alex is beyond words......you have perfectly created this bond that I can not only see but sense as well. Beautiful job Oh, and as for the parents, karma is a bitch....I'm just waiting.....................Mike

Fitz, First of all, I want to thank you for sharing this story with everyone; I know that it has touched me deeply from the very first chapter. At times, I felt anger, betrayal, depression, just like Scott...and it was healing for me to go through these and many other emotions again. I don't think a person ever fullt recovers from such a tragic loss, we must learn to incorporate that loss into oour lives...it becomes a part of us...but we must realize this and not let it define us. I would like to let you know how good it was that you allowed us to see Scott in one of his "funks" and how Steve is always somewhere in his thoughts...that's the way it is, and you reflected that in this chapter. Noah is truly Scott's savior in that he understands how Scott is not rejecting him...he is trying to make room in his heart and mind,a place that had been promised forever to Steve. Enough of my ramblings...GREAT STORY, GREAT CHARACTERS......I LOVED IT...........Mike

I think that I mentioned to you months ago that my twin brother had died and how parts of my life have never seemed to be quite right since then. I am enjoying this story being related primarily through Scott viewpoint, but I would really like to read about the surviving twin, Tom's reaction to his brothers death and to the aftermath and how his life was changed by Steve's death......Just a thought, I'm going to miss new chapters, your friend, Mike

Andrew, I really enjoy the easy way in which you guide us through each "mini-drama" as it unfolds...Every subplot is revealed almost delicately;but with urgency and power....Great chapter, can't wait !!!!!!!! Mike

Black Friday in Atlanta is horrible !!!!!! Did it once; NEVER again.........Oh, love the chapter, hate the cliffy............Mike

Alex's protective instincts will be the deciding factor in this confrontation,,,,,,,people can and do amazing things when they feel their loved ones are in peril. Kei's parents should realize this and be thankful that their son has someone this committed in his corner....but wait...they're assholes.......Go team Alex,protect your man!!!!!!!! Mike

Great beginning....it's always nice to meet someone friendly when you're the new kid............Mike

Welcome back Andrew, really enjoyed catching up with the Triple J gang................Mike

Simply beautiful........Honest and raw...............Mike

This is such a sweet chapter...bringing back memories of trips to WDW with my own boys .....many smiles and happy tears..........Thanks for the memories......felt as if I had gone with the whole gang...........Mike

I find myself urging Kei on to wake up and join with Alex in opposition to his parents......Hurry Kei, hurry; before it's too late. I can feel Alex's excitement and reinvigorated dedication to accomplish this hurdle. I still can't understand why Kei's mum would do anything that would not benefit her son...I would think that no one would be that selfish or controlling, but I know from experience that's not the case.....Hurry with next chapter Mike

I feel so desparately sad and hearbroken after reading this chapter.....it seems that this nightmare is unending, so I must thank you for so precisely creating this time , place and situation. The dialogue between Alex and Rose and the doctor and nurse and Bonnie is spot on. Great job as hopeless as it is,I pray for comfort for Alex,and to a degree Bonnie. I see Alex as much a victim in this story as Kei and his devotion to Kei what makes this so sad for me........Again, powerful chapter, thanks !!! Mike

Although I have never had a brain tumor, I have had experienced diabetic comas in my lifetime. I can't say for certain that I was aware of specific conversations of doctors and visitors, but I do have very definite impressions or feelings of certain pieces of thoughts that ocurred while I was unconscious which were later verified as actually have happened. I truly believe that this contact is not in vain......it is truly wonderous to realize that something that you thought or felt had happened, actually did. Excellent story,I love the concept and all the drama swirling around Kei, Alex and now Marie............Mike

Love me some karaoke !!!!!!!!!!! I would so have loved to be there to witness this night !!!!!!!!!! Loved every little bit !!!!!!!!!!!!! Mike

I really like a story where sex is not the only reason to read. This is a sweet and sensual dance between Zach and Ryan...they both seem to respect the other and want to be together...when the time is right. Maybe I'm old fashioned, but I kinda don't want to screw someone and then have to make a reason to ditch them afterwards because we have nothing to talk about. Anticipation of the union is a great turn on...probably because the best part of sex happens in head...(the big one)...Anyway, great story and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.............Mike

Please don't forget to find someone for Tom to find happiness with. Being a surviving twin, I have a special interest with him. It is so hard to continue your life when a very fundemental part of you is gone; it's like a part of you has died..I remember Matt (my twin) at the wierdest times, and it has been close to 30 years, so I just know that Tom must have these unsettling feelings as well. I am really enjouying the ride.......great chapter !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Mike

This story is very scary to me...I can't possibly imagine being in Kei's position...it would be absolute hell to be controlled against your wishes,is he aware of his surroundings, who can he trust...too much selfish posturing from his parents and poor Alex has to fight them at every corner........Laws must be amended to protect the rights of everyone..........Mike

Starting a new relationship is nerve racking without having to deal with issues of confidence and self worth...I should know....been there, done that. This story is very close to some moments from my past, it's like you had witnessed the scene and are now writing about it...Anyway, I really am enjoying watching Zach manuveur the landmines of his new relationship with Ryan, always second guessing everything said and done...maybe he will be better at this than I was. It's kinda fun to see someone else doing things that you have done...hindsight being 20/20 and all.......Keep up the good work.............Mike

Fitz, great chapter, as always....you're so easy to read, just enough drama to keep us interested without being overly dramatic and ridiculous......until next time...........Mike

Happy tears!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Mike

What I like about this story is that everything works out...for everyone !!!! Even though this would probably never unfold in reality as it does in the story, it is still nice to see it happen. Fantasy, maybe...but it is still very enjoyable to see happiness and acceptance for the boys.....Maybe one day, this will be the norm...it gives me a warm feeling in my soul to see this type of love and respect from the parents to each of the partners....well written, Andrew............................Mike

Don't tell anyone I told you this, but I wouldn't mind it if you kept calling me 'Dick'." ................I love this line;it says so much about Richard,his self awareness of his own short comings toward everyone in his family,and maybe the possibility of improvement. Tom will rise from the ashes a stronger better man, he's lucky to have Scott to help him heal............Mike

Fitz, I was first capitavted by this story with the fiasco that was Steve's funeral...it reminded me of actual confrontations (and other family garbage) that happened when I was forced to endure a very close loss. I guess that I have been rooting for Scott since the opening paragraphs to find a fulfilling love beyond the one he shared with Steve. In my own life, I have found that grief takes many forms, affects people differently and can be a unifying force. Some folks can't seem to find their way through the dark time and get stuck there....I have wondered what causes them to do so and I think that maybe it's a case of guilt (in their interaction or abandonment with the passed loved one)...I think maybe Steve's parents are experiencing some of that guilt in their treatment of Scott and its effects on Steve while he was alive....And another thing, Southern people are so interesting,many still live their lives with outdated social rules, it makes me crazy !!! Anyway, as usual I am a great fan and supporter of your work...it helps get through those dark times..........Mike

Each of these boys seem to be nice and loving, fulfilling a need in the other, even if they don't yet realize it. The introduction of pit bulls and the unmanageable thoroughbred horse is a beautiful way to describe how we all discount and desriminate against those people and things we are uncomfortable with or frightened of(usually, just educating or exposing ourselves to these unknowns will dispell those feelings) Andrew, this is a great start to a story of growth and acceptance..........Mike

In laws....I've many times wondered why God even created them to begin with; my own history, being somewhat jaded makes me distrust their involvement with Zach, Noah and Scott. In adition, your description of them is eerily familiar....however, I am hopeful that they will have some redeeming qualities and everyone can find some common ground where healing and growth can occur, I'm looking forward to reading the next few chapters to see how it plays out.....it does happen in "real life", doesn't it? Fitz, as usual, I look forward to each chapter, this one is no exception ..........Mike