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When the realization of the perfectness (is this a word?) of a new connection is revealed, life IS fucking good........I think that I have rehearsed some of those same lines of dialog in my head with potential partners myself.....unfortunately without their success. It takes balls to open yourself up to someone new; to lay yourself bare........Bravo to them both for sensing that THIS could be more!!!!!! Loving it Mike

Gary, I fully understand Arron's nervousness and insecurity during his pre-date prep...it's reassuring to know that I'm not the only one that freaks out on every detail of my appearance and I'll admit to practicing many different scenarios of the date and "running lines" in what I think (hope) might happen. I would say that Arron just needs to calm down and enjoy this date,,, but I don't think he can (I never could..lol) Lots of promise here, very enjoyable to read.............:)Mike

Thanks, Gary for the headsup on this story.....Having read all of COTT to date, I expect their will be some duplications.....actually I'm hoping to revisit some of the shared storyline; only this time through Chet and Arron's POV. I really liked having their meeting "fleshed out" here.....love the little details and nervousnesson both their parts....................:)Mike

I'm finally caught up......I've enjoyed the faceoff with "the bitch" Arron & Chett"s payback and profession of love love for each other, Lanny's confession and steps toward redemption and possible connection to Janine. All in all, this has been beautifully written and a joy to read,,,even the difficult parts......Great job Gary...the problem now is.....where's the next chapter? lol...........:)Mike

O Fuck..............Mike

Thank you.....:)Mike

Gary, I want you to know that I have enjoyed every chapter so far, it's romantic and fun with enough angst and drama to keep the story vibrant. Michael and Kendall's declarations of love for each other is pure and beautiful.........But, this chapter was very difficult for me to read; perhaps it reinforced the missed opportunities in my own life with my parents....it was raw and while reading, I was transported back in time to occasions where this scene could have happened for me...but didn't. To me, this is proof positive of your ability to connect with the reader. Through my tears, I thank you..............Mike

Wow....this iswhat i always prayed for EXCELLENT :)Mike

Being a son of a cop as well, I can appreciate Kendall's misery as a child....living as something not quite as good as your father requires you to be. For many years I tried to be the son he could be proud of;should be proud of.......until I realized that my life and my decisions were mine, not his. Unfortunately, in my case, acceptance was never acheived and even today I wish it had been.... Great chapter Gary, very touching with Agnes......NOW onto dear old dad.............Mike

Gary, First of all I want to apologize for not leaving any reviews for the past 10 or so chapters......I've been selfishly reading one after another. The dynamic between K & M is tender and playful, full of promise and commitment....I have really enjoyed their interactions in trying to be a perfect partner for each other. Michael's parents are delightful and the guys are truly blessed to have their love and support.Chet is a delight. However, Kendall's parents make me think "Danger Will Pobinson". I am sure something from the real world will intrude to test our guys....I think they can handle anything coming their way!!!! I just wanted to stop a second,acknowledge the chapters I've already read and loved before I jump back in to another marathon...Hey, soon I'll be caught up.......... Mike

I fucking love them both!!! And you too, Gary ....... Mike

I'm glad that Kendall has found a friend in Chet. I remember doubting every thought and decision I made after realizing that I was gay. That's normal and clearly relatable Great chapter.....glad I "found" it. Mike

Gary, you have shown us a true and perfect love between Michael and Kendall ....even if not fully recognized by the pair. It is pure and raw and beautiful I almost feel guilty in witnessing this connection of souls. Beautifully written......Mike

Rex, I have no review for you today; only my sincerest praise and gratitiude for your sharing your story with us....I have been moved to tearsmany times; been aroused by the growing love between Barry and Dave and deeply touched by that love. Again, thank you........... Mike

Rex, You have a talent for pushing all my buttons; Dave's letter to Barry was honest and pure...just like their love for each other. I only wish that I had a Dave ...they are both lucky bastards !!! This spidy sense gives me pause as I know it's a harbinger of some future major drama.....a drama from your imagination that has proven to be chilling. I can almost hear the musical score as I read along, the suspense with the volume and tempo getting louder and faster....even mentioning Gladys Knight in Dave's note adds a level of romance! Although not a true cliffhanger, I feel as if it is......and I remain anxiously awaiting the next chapter Mike

I know how Tony felt when the mother in law could be moving into the garage apartment. Similiar thing happened to me a few years back; only my new tenenat moved downstairs....I knew it would be a problem even before it happened.....and I wasn't wrong.........Ha.............Mike

Hi Rex, This is the chapter I have been waiting for....It's been a long journey for both Barry and Dave and to see the act of love expressed so completely by Barry was almost a religous experience.!!!! lol Seriously though, I'm happy to see them acheive another level of equality in their relationship. Desriptions, dialog and story was spot on............Bravo, my friend, I'm so glad that you are on the mend and hope that your recovery is quick and complete Mike

I must say that I was originally skeptical that I would enjoy a tale of a human-dolphin hybrid, but i will admit that you captured my imaginationand my heart as well. Beautifully written from beginning to end, this was a joy to read . Thank you for sharing :0 Mike

"Oh, Shit".............................. Mike

Shawn is only confirming what Casey already knows...together they can make a future for themselves...there's just one impediement.....Martin...and I don't think he stands a chance against this team!!!! I am really enjoying this story.....GREAT WRITING Mike

As much as I detest cliffies, this was excellent!!!! Hurry and post the next chapter...please, please, please :)Mike

It's hell when your head won"t leave your heart alone. Sometimes your heart IS smarter than your head. Beautifully written as to show ow Martin reminds Tony that their love is unbreakable.I think that each could learn from his partner to trust the other just a bit more. Bravo..........Mike

This was so beautifully written......the giving of love between two lovers is truly a gift from God, and you have captured that essence. Now, let's deal with Martin...............:)Mike

Thump.....thump....thump.....thump....My heart is beating quickly with nervous tension......Excellent chapter;anxiously awaiting the next Mike

Happiest of birthdays my friend, welcome to the club Mike