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Andrew, As usual, it has been a complete joy to read each chapter...it's a great way to escape from the grittiness of everyday reality and I would like to thank you for sharing this vision of love and acceptance. ......Mike
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Beautifully written......all romantical and stuff....gets me all warmed up while it's so cold outside....Mike
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We love who we love; beautifully written and I loved it!.......Mike
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I don't know for sure, but you must also be an awesome cook. Your finesse with character development is just like when making a cake , you mut add each and every ingredient in order to acheive the goal, the cake is not complete if any ingredient is missing or if the quantity or quality is off...Normally, I would say great job, but today I say My compliments to the chef!!!!!! Mike
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Fitz, I think you know how much I have enjoyed this journey, it has been cathartic for me in some unresolved aspects of my own life. For that , I say THANK YOU....Maybe the title should be Moving Beyond instead of Moving On as we don't really move on....we learn to adjust and adapt to changes that life seems to have for us...these changes, whatever they may be become a part of who we become,but they don't have to define us, Again, thanks..............Mike
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Andrew, I just wanted to let you know how much I am enjoying your stories...it's refreshing to read about loving and nurturing relationship between everone ( including their animals )...Makes me wish to be part of this group.............Mike
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Chapter 26 - At Long Last
flamingo136 commented on Fitz's story chapter in Chapter 26 - At Long Last
I am so happy to read this chapter;to finally have someone to share their life and love with is overwhelming. Both have been victims of life's carnage and each could have just said "to hell with it all", but took the chance to open themselves again. Beautifully written and choreographed....maybe they can truly work together as a couple to solve issues of being a couple as well as being parents.... Great job Fitz!!!!!!...........Mike -
It's kinda cool to read about some of the things around Atlanta....it is a great place to live and having familiar attractions named makes the story so much more REAL to me....Don't forget Buckhead or Piedmont Park.........Mike
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Andrew, what a sad and bittersweet story.....I am touched by the strength that young Jesse possesses;although damaged by his losses, I am sure he will find support nad love within the family of the Triple J.........Mike
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Chapter 24 - A Day at the Zoo
flamingo136 commented on Fitz's story chapter in Chapter 24 - A Day at the Zoo
I wanted to drop a line thanking you for giving Scott a believable and appropriate amount of time to grieve for his dead husband. This makes the intriduction of Noah and Zach seem more REAL to me. Great job......Mike -
I recently ran across your story and have been enjoying it very much. Being from the south myself , I can appreciate some of the "special" inflections and tones of the different characters. Good story......Mike
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I have loved this story from the beginning to the absolute ending...all the pain, tears,doubt from both Ben and Rick have been destined to be together....Glad to finally see that happen....Great story......Mike
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Talk about a turd in the punchbowl....I can't wait....Great chapter...........Mike
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You have captured the all consuming dark shadow of depression brought on by abuse. Although I have never suffered to this degree, I can relate...I also realize the heartache that I caused to my loved ones as they tried to "help" me......The emotions I feel when reading this story are sometimes hard to deal with, but I can appreciate them nonetheless......This is cathartic for me, thanks.............Mike
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Talk About Politics & Religion
flamingo136 commented on Dark's story chapter in Talk About Politics & Religion
Just a quick note......I have thoroughly enjoyed this story so far; dialog and emotions smack of stark honesty.....beautifully written !!!............Mike -
Billy.....glad to finally see another chapter; I've been following this story and patiently waiting for more (that's not true...I haven't been very patient)...But the wait was well worth it....Great job with character development and dialog........Mike
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Great chapter...you have the ability to convey empathy for others (human and animal), simpathy and encouragement...I feel the connections between everyone,both new and established characters
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Andrew, not only is your writing appealing to me, but I think it is educational as well to others. Innocence lost (no...STOLEN) at the hand of another is a totally unforgivable....Bringing this subject to light will surely help those in need......Beautiful job........Mike
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Chapter 10 Confessions...
flamingo136 commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 10 Confessions...
Glad to have you back Kim, hope the holidays and all were kind to you and yours......It's good that both Heath and Alec were truthful to each other as they now understand that Simon is the common enemy....But I think trust and communication between them still needs improving....Great job,as usual!!! Mike......... P.S. thanks for the info on your status update about this chapterbeing available -
I knew it!!!!!!! Keep it coming !!!!
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AND.......we're off/////Great start!!!!!!
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Although I have nver been a "fan" of this genre, I would like to let you know that I was quite surprised to actually enjoy the read. You had a good balance of all components to make an erotic and adventurous sci fi story fun. Very easy to read....thanks for my first dip into this pool ...I really liked it!!!!
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It was nice to see an early version to Scott and Steve. Young love, full of excitement, and anticipation is to be cherished by all who have been blessed to ever experience this special gift. I remember the sights and smells of my parents home and enjoying them anew with my own new true love...many years ago. It's funny , but the tradtions started as a child have found their way into our home,mixed and adapted with my love's own traditions to share with our family. Your story just made me think of things that I hadn't thought of in years...mostly happy childhood memories....Thank you ...this is a nice Christmas gift......All the best to you and your family
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Beautifully written, I thoroughly enjoyed reading every word...Bravo!!!!!
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Thanks Andrew, I needed to read this story.....it has helped me make it through the day.
