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I've been trying to get to bed for the past half-an-hour Caz, but it's not your fault that your story's so good. Oh, wait a minute, yes it is!
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This Kevin guy really gives me the creeps but Daniel seems to know how to spoil his fun, if he can hold out?
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It gets worse for poor Daniel. I thought that they would have concentrated on finding him first before having an inquiry about why he ran Suddenly it doesn't look all that good for poor Daniel.
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Daniel is smart (except when he ran away) and he can outsmart this guy but obviously not outgun him. This is good or good for me, bad for Daniel.
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Yikes! Running away was a big mistake. I hope that his brothers and Carlos are not that far behind.
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Poor Daniel. Toby is being unnecessarily protective of his brother. It will be interesting to see how Silas reacts.
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Thank you for your kind words mister will.
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Thank you for sharing this with us @mister will In today's more liberal society, it's easy to forget in the not so distant past, being gay was not an option for some people. There are still many people who won't accept it but there is no doubt that young people today have it a lot easier. I'm glad that you managed to persevere with the story. That was a lot of reading in just a few days.
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Robbie seems to have found a certain connection with Jamie. It may be a number of things but this kid has certainly exposed a side of Robbie's character which we haven't seen a lot of so far.
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That's sods law, an alarm just when it looks like getting interesting. Kind of thing that would happen to me.
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Yeah for Daniel.
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I agree with everyone else here, a real nice chapter with Carlos and Daniel.
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I'm still here Caz and enjoying the story, although I had to refresh myself a little before continuing today. Sometimes I get a little busy and have to take a break from reading to do other things. Anyway back to your story.
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Thank you @mg777 for a wonderful comment. I'm sorry if it made you late for work. Bloody selfish pop stars. Cheers my friend. There will be a chapter every week until the end.
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Hey @Benji I've always been told that Colorado is a beautiful state. We'll see if a storm is indeed waiting. It does seem a little too peaceful at the moment. Thanks for commenting from Colorado my friend.
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That would have been the wisest move for Andy, without doubt but he seems to have little self-control. Maybe Jazz will jazz things up a little? Thanks JP. Good to see you back on site. Your absence left a big and very noticeable hole my friend.
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You're right @Cris L although it's difficult to know which one you're referring to. I'll take a guess an go for Andy?
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Hi Steve. Yeah a little tongue in cheek this one. I don't know if there's anyone quite like Tyrone in the real world of pop nowadays. I get the feeling that they are to easily replaceable to have that much balls. Poor Jazz has been stuck with such an unfortunate name and yeah I suppose it is a cliffhanger. Thanks @wildone
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Yeah Tyrone is a real wild child and a complex character. Thanks @Wesley8890
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Should be one chapter a week every weekend until the finish now and we're just over a third the way through the story. Thanks @chris191070
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Possibly, although I don't usually like to leave people in suspenders! Thanks @frigidjason
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Andy's no better at all. He's all talk and no trousers as they say, quite literally in this case. Thanks @droughtquake
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It was my first glimpse of how different and easy my life could be with someone like Tyrone on my arm. I must have been completely mad to even think in such a way. If I had of possessed the slightest morsel of intelligence, then I would have walked out of that house right then and never returned. I considered doing that the moment I saw my reflection in his full-length mirror. I was horrified; it looked nothing like me. My usual bouncy, light brown mop looked greasy and flat, stuck to
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I think that it'd just in Ontario that they do this but for as long as I can remember, milk generally comes in clear plastic bags. It's impossible to use, of course, without first purchasing a plastic purpose made jug. The bag fits in the jug and you are able to pour by cutting off the corner. It still takes a bit of practice to avoid spilling and is guaranteed to confuse anyone who is new to the country.
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Chapter 46 The Day After Day
Dodger commented on Dodger's story chapter in Chapter 46 The Day After Day
This is obviously a mistake. It should read 'buy' instead of 'bide'. I have just corrected this.
