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  1. Scarab
    yet another awesome chapter, I wonder if the graft is truly clueless about what is going on? Aaron's abilities are rather expansive and pretty potent and so is the scope of Sam's power. i can't wait for more, good stuff
  2. Scarab
    things seems to be heating up pretty fast, on all fronts ... good chapter
  3. Scarab
    God yes, everything about this was brilliant..... Loved how you handled the home scene with the father's rage, the aftermath, the mother's response and Dave's composure..... and Alan... Alan, my favourite part of the story, you did well, and i was not expecting that. sucks that he doesn't have a chance in hell with Nick because some competition is always interesting
  4. Scarab
    you lost readers .... guess they didn't like what they read.. aw well such is life another awesome chapter,the previous was great as well, the rape wasn't exactly unexpected, out of character for Craig i suppose, but i guess i didn't know everything about the guy. they got found out ... bout time lolol....... we all knew it was coming, and i like how you did it, next chapter is sure to be great
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    “You've got a choice to make, love,” Christopher whispered in Victoria's ear. Her eyes widened. As Victoria returned to reality, she noticed Christopher standing behind the sofa chair where she collapsed when Rufus badgered her. He was dressed in black. She looked down... her hands were glowing and nails sparking; she was literally electric as her short, brown hair stood on end. Victoria looked up at Rufus who had taken a couple steps back. She stood up. “W-what the fuck?” Rufus mu
  6. Scarab
    another good one, again the tension was palatable.. great job. Alan is hurting pretty bad poor chap, but i think dave must be pretty dense if he can't see why, Nick did tell him as well.
  7. Scarab
    another awesome chapter... rather impressively liberal kids you got there lol, re: spin the bottle lol.... it was great seeing a bit more of Dave's innocence but i must say Alan is now my favourite character, weird i know, but i tend to latch on the peripheral characters with potentially huge future roles *not so subtle hint hint* lol
  8. Scarab
    This was great, Dave adjusted quickly, but then again he seems like the sort to jump into things.... i'm pretty interested in Alan now..... its all looking great
  9. Scarab
    great chapter, i really didn't know what to believe for a moment there
  10. Scarab
    another unexpected twist, but i've come to enjoy that about your writing, as well as your story time frames. there is a lot to take in but i love the tension that is building, the graft seems to be planting the seeds of change but he also seems expendable in the grand scheme of things ... awesome chapter.. as always
  11. Scarab
    my gosh what an amazing chapter. i love the lore you introduced, beautifully written
  12. Scarab
    big fan of the theme here, another awesome chapter
  13. Scarab

    Glossary

    Scarab commented on JMH's story chapter in Glossary

    thanks for this
  14. Scarab
    Awesome chapter, i had to catch up and i'm glad i have all these chapters to gorge on at once i was not expecting that with Landon and Greg.. at all!! but i love it all the same, awesome pairing, and a force to reckon with in the future for sure. i always figure that they maybe related, but i didnt have much to go on, thanks for clearing that up. if its possible, i think i'm getting even more into this story
  15. Scarab
    The living room of the old, wooden house was dimly lit. A large, drafty den fit for a creature; it had old family photos of this creature and other miscellaneous things decorated all around it. The wooden mantle housed dusty rugby trophies, scratched and scraped…warped from their gold, lustrous pride by time and time did not forget the creature. It sat in the corner facing an ajar glass window. He was a bald-headed, decrepit mess of wrinkles tattooed across his face and bags that weighed down hi
  16. Scarab
    In bed, Victoria tossed and turned; her bandaged hand throbbed but didn't wake her. While sleeping she heard a voice speak: You stand alone on the edge of a cliff adorned in white; the sea thunders below. The gentle breeze blows your gown as you step closer and closer to take flight. You wonder why you are here; yes...you wonder how I know your fear. For this lonely mountain is crashed by waves, like you. You say you want it to end; your mouth too heavy to speak, I answer your subli
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    Balance

    Scarab commented on Adam Phillips's story chapter in Balance

    amazing as always and worth the wait.... thatisall
  18. Scarab
    Now twenty-one years old, Victoria lived on her own, committed to a relationship with Jackson. He was a short, muscular man with dark, brown skin and neatly cut hair. His face had chiseled cheekbones that lead to his narrow chin.. A few strands of gray dotted his jaw bone which was rough with a shorted beard. He wore a navy blue, arm-hole shirt and gray sweat pants. At thirty- seven years old, Jerome was almost 20 years Victoria's senior. His hand slowly crawled below her boney waist, gently c
  19. Scarab
    good to see Landon back, now i am questioning Aaron's true purpose and abilities. i like what you did with Landon as well, and thanks for the back story on the Talented history, great chapter
  20. Scarab
    In the kitchen, Rufus sat at the table reading his morning newspaper. His bald head reflected sunlight entering the glass window above the sink. Standing behind Rufus, she stared at the “man.” In the bright light the girl could see him clearly, examining him anew: his forearms extended from his red, plaid shirt bushed with black hair; it was tucked into his khaki trousers that hung over his steel-tipped boots. Next to him was a silver ash tray from which dying smoke of a recently discarded cigar
  21. Scarab
    i've been following this story like a Cult, its great, you done it again. i'm a big fan of Mac, and the Marc/Mac story is perfectly done in my opinion. i'm not a fan of Hadrian, i don't like him... i'm sure he's innocent, but i've never been drawn to the fatalistic and defeatist personality (at least that is how i perceive him ) love your plot twist, and i know you don't often follow the conventional story formula ... i'm looking forward to see where this ends up.
  22. Scarab
    Grey clouds cried and cried in the night's sky...flooding the brick laid streets. Pedestrians ran for shelter under nearby awnings, scattering water trapped in pools until a willing shoe freed it. The town was wet; cold. The kind of weather that only curling up in one's bed, cocooned in the thickest quilt and drinking a warm cup of tea would do. Yet, here she was, trapped in this dreadful weather while waiting to cross the street at the corner of Mayer and Main. Victoria-Ann's short, muddy-brown
  23. Scarab
    Scott was slicing through the woods like the wind, he knew he’d catch up with at least one of them; what he didn’t know was what he was going to do when he got there. Leaving Mathei his resolve was pretty solid but it was founded on rage, he knew that sort of motivation wouldn’t last and if it did it would only lead to regret. The moonlight was slowly trickling through the pines now, time had really flew by and he wasn’t familiar with this area. Up ahead he saw a man kneeling in a glade, his
  24. Scarab
    Mathei’s eyes darted from left to right outside of the cabin, sweat was running down his neck and forearms and he knew it wasn’t only due to the jolly bonfire before him. “Dude what the fuck are we doing?” He knew that should have come out a bit more forceful but what actually peeped out was a panicked whimper. Francis looked back to his friend with scorn. “Mat don’t pussy out now man, they’re done for. Did you see what they did to your brother back there.” Mathei’s chest heaved, he continu
  25. Scarab
    great chapter! i jeeze, it doesn't stop for Aaron doesn't it. Jon is turning out to be competent guy, but it seems aaron has some (non-ability) ability or at least a negating one
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