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“Harmony! In front you, jump!” Harmony hurdled over a thicket of fallen pine and fir; the branches were hardened and mangled jutting out like knives from the ground. The forest floor was littered with them. 5 gruelling minutes had passed, and all 5 of their paces were steady. Damn it. Felix thought Why couldn’t the fat ones chase after us instead. He wasn’t worried about fatigue, he was in prime condition, and Harmony could out run him, out sprint him and even out last him in bed. Actually,
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thanks for the history update in this story ... good stuff as always
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i've fallen for this story. i'll admit i got a bit lost with the changing over of Aaron in to different custodians to quickly. it did take some time to keep up, but i'm glad i did, this chapter explains so much and i can see a rich plot line on the way. by the way i love Sam and Jon,
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Lisa couldn’t understand it. It happened so fast none of it was logical. Harmony was on the stool next to her at the bar; Nick was working the afternoon shift and would be leaving before the night really picked up. That was the main reason she agreed with Harmony’s prick of a boyfriend to come with him to the bar. Lisa had no idea what Harmony saw in him, Felix was an asshole to everyone without some sort of sporting record. He believed he was God’s gift to grass, and every step he made on
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“You can’t be serious bro?!” “I’m dead serious, I told you there would be hell to pay for your shit this afternoon” It was only five minutes after getting into his truck that Scott had called him, pleading with him to keep Lisa away from her best friend Harmony and see him instead. “She’s the one Felix, I know it. When I’m with her the last thing on my mind are her titties, or thighs, or that… “She’s coming with me Scott” Felix gladly interrupted. “Get acquainted with your hand this evenin
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Part Three: Escape into Nightmares
Scarab commented on JMH's story chapter in Part Three: Escape into Nightmares
wasn't expecting it to go pear shape so soon, but i liked the action a lot.. sorta different from your previous stories, i'm really enjoying this one. perhaps its the horror, or the gore haha. -
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My fears include dying and dying out at sea.
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Felix Rhodes- Social suicide in the garden of Eden
Scarab commented on Scarab's story chapter in Felix Rhodes- Social suicide in the garden of Eden
Thanks Conner, Felix is one of my favourites to write about, i'm sure you will have something (good or bad) to say about his choices in the future.And ginger plants are beautiful -
“Break!” Coach Newton barked in his deep baritone across the mats. Felix had enough sweat on him to know he’d been taking far longer than he should on this bulking freshman frame in his grip. It was just a routine practice but he knew better than to let the tadpoles waltz their way onto the team without getting a few bruises. “Come on Felix that’s three escapes this pansy has on you!” Felix let the freshman get his wrists firmly on the inside of his cross hold. The freshman now had the ad
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No growth can come without sacrifice. the trials of 6 souls are weighed against humanity and their penance is to ensure the safety of that which they turned their backs on.
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i'm patiently waiting for the WiiU ninja gaiden and all things Mario ....thatisall
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Part Two: The Master's Favorite
Scarab commented on JMH's story chapter in Part Two: The Master's Favorite
well this is different. Cake day took me by surprise despite the tag in the cover. i love it all the same, and the juxtaposition with cake.. it works for me. i can see so many possibilities but my warped mind is enjoying Landon and Aaron become bitter rivals and enemies in the distant future -
your doing a great job with this characters, nothing seems inevitable and i like that. and yess i'm continuing to fall in love with Orion
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i'm really liking this series so far. i love the concept of what Gabe is, and as some one that is keen on nature fond of environmentalism and studying ecology... i really really appreciate what you are doing. and i love werewolves lol.. also i have to say, i love Orion,
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well i wasn't expecting that from Eric, nice little twist there. i have to agree it does sound final, and i desperately don't want it to be
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Part One: Down in the Depths
Scarab commented on JMH's story chapter in Part One: Down in the Depths
i always enjoyed you style, glad to see something new from you. Centurion is my favourite story on here, and i can't wait to see what you plan to do with this stroyline. good stuff man -
great consequence, i think the rape brought out what it needed to in Eric (or at least what i think it is hidden within him ) great as always can't wait for the next one.
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Ch 01: The Mages of Malden
Scarab commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 01: The Mages of Malden
glad to see this story back. the continuity is good, i'm glad i refreshed us with Adam, and also who i believed was Jacob lol can't wait for more.. was a tad bit confused with the separation of the elements tho, the whole Water and Earth thing.. but i like it -
what a hot mess.... great chapter... amazing story can't wait for more
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i'm glad you restarted, and i like the direction you are going here... thanks for keeping Jacob around btw
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yeah i know how he feels... i really really hate pink, it irritates my senses. great chapter tho but i'm slowly liking Sandro more and more
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yeah.. kinda short as Grim said, but i loved the angst in it
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wow, i didn't expect the mess to hit the fan so soon. and the mystery behind it hmmmm. is it the girlfriend or the sister
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you're only 37..... and pong was a great game
