Adamantyne
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Wow! That was probably one of the weirdest sex scenes I have ever read xD Sligtly awkward lol
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Been waiting for David to show some weakness. Nice that Billy can finally show some character
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Uhhh, the old man finally losing control over Billy. Nice!
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Jesus Christ, Candace. I hate people like her, and there's something strange to her. I would've expected Sam to handle that last situation a bit more smoothly.
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I am in a loss of words (thought I'd let you know that). Holy shit O_O
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Secrets between friends
Adamantyne commented on NightOwl88's story chapter in Secrets between friends
I'm not an expert on how to go about a cutter, but blurting it out to a friend of his probably wouldn't be my first choice. I hope we get to see more of Walker; he's a funny character. And I'm sorry that I only review the ending of each chapter, but I have trouble remembering in details what happen in the beginning xD -
Oh no! I really hope that David will know how to handle his newfound knowlegde about Billy. Shit, I'm pretty sure I would have a hard time figuring out how to act toward a cutter that I barely knew.
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My inner mother is agitated that those people don't know how to return a handshake. Manners, people! Anyway... I'm starting to have quite a few questions by know. Your pace is really good, not too fast, not too slow. Nice
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Promising start. Looking forward for the next chapter. Poor Billy, though. His dad's an ass.
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Wow, well they were quite upfront xD
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I hate you, I really fucking hate you! How could you leave this story behind ending with a chapter like this? Omg, you have to update it soon! I kind of need to know if my theory about Matt, Jeremy and Lucca was correct! You can't just leave me hanging xD!
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Chapter 8: Truth and Trouble
Adamantyne commented on intune's story chapter in Chapter 8: Truth and Trouble
Okay, my guess is that Matt said Lucca's name, but then again I'm quite sure Lucca isn't that common a name.. Jeremy probably would have picked up on it, if that were the case? Anyway, just wondering - don't tell me xD -
Chapter 6: Can't Keep Me Away pt 2
Adamantyne commented on intune's story chapter in Chapter 6: Can't Keep Me Away pt 2
I'm sorry I haven't review the previous chapters, but this is kind of catching. Is there something we don't know about Matt and Lucca? It seems that way, Lucca has a really weird way of not showing his emotions towards him xD -
Okay, normally I would review most chapters, but my internet is really annoying so I'm just gonna sum it up now. I really like this story, your writing and wording is good. Sometimes it seemed as if you rushed a bit especially in the beginning and it could get a bit sappy. There are still some things that needs to be worked out and I'd really love to read it Anyway... I have a feelling this came out a bit more negative than I wanted it to, but I really think it's good As far as I can see this story is not yet finished? I know you will probably not ever update this again seeing as how long it's been since you last updated it, but I really think you should give it a go.
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Lol, I didn't catch on until I reached the end. Very nice twist indeed!
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Well, this was a pretty rough story, I liked it however. It really made me think and I think I may even have gained some sort of sympathy for drug users (they've never been my biggest problem though). From the beginning to the end you wording and phrasing were rather perfect, very moving. I just wanted you to know that this is probably one of the best things I have ever read, I thought it would be a bit cliché at first but it wasn't at all - at least not by my standards. Major thumbs up from me. Keep going
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I feel so horrible. And what the fuck is the matter with Rob - how sick can you be? Jesus, this is gonna scar me for life xD! (OKay, I probably shouldn't joke but...)
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Jesus Christ! I'm surprised I even finished reading this chapter after the event with Chris. Made me sick to my stomach! Damn, that was rough!
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They do have an odd relationship. Oh my God! I really love the way you write, it's so convincing and catching. Love it!
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GOd, I love the way you write! I love how you pretty much just write what he's thinking, even though it can be a bit "messy" at times. Really good so far
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Well, I must say thisd story surprised me. It took me awhile to understand who was talking and when. The story is very good though, even if I may have liked a clearer division between the different story. You have amazing writing skills and you have a wonderful vocabulary
