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    Perfect

    asamvav111 commented on Nephylim's story in Fiction

    Well the previous reviewers say it all. Nothing new to add. Just a question though. Wouldn't true love warrent a little bit more trust and patience in Lief's part? That character just seems too juvenile to me. But then again, without that, the whole story looses its lustre. You are good with dark themes. You know that. But, you always seem to bring a sense of closure with it, a peaceful ending. Not enough of that here. Was it deliberate?
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    Poetry bares it all. You can not hide to poerty. Beautiful, sad and honest to the core. Captured the essence of first love so well. Thank you for sharing such an amazing piece of private emotion with us.
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    A messiahnic child and two daddies... Interesting. Please don't let anything bad happen to Anthony. I have a question though. Do you feel that the child being born with both the parents' essence, is a lot like a child born to a hetero couple? I confess, I would be the happiest man on earth, if only I could bear my husband's child. A wish-fulfillment fantasy perhaps. Anyways, loved your concept of Starlights. More stories with them?
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    Waiting for a fullblown sequel. Exellent job by the way.
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