Poetry bares it all. You can not hide to poerty. Beautiful, sad and honest to the core. Captured the essence of first love so well. Thank you for sharing such an amazing piece of private emotion with us.
A messiahnic child and two daddies... Interesting. Please don't let anything bad happen to Anthony. I have a question though. Do you feel that the child being born with both the parents' essence, is a lot like a child born to a hetero couple? I confess, I would be the happiest man on earth, if only I could bear my husband's child. A wish-fulfillment fantasy perhaps. Anyways, loved your concept of Starlights. More stories with them?