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You outdid your self on this one! Trying to not be too upset about the one more ch and Epilogue warning
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Chapter 21 – Complicated Mess
SweetAllis commented on EmDee's story chapter in Chapter 21 – Complicated Mess
Just read all chapters in one sitting, i LOVE this story so please don't leave us hanging! - Sweet -
Really enjoying this story!! I especially like that you brought in a darker character in your writings! Goes to show what i've felt through out your other stories (yes i have now read them all) which is that you've made it somewhat easy for your self and 'cheated' us readers from all of your talent. Talent, which you have by the way, in spades! I sincerely hope you'll continue this story!!! - Sweet
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Love everything about this story! Even the end..although..i DO hope you'll wright a sequal, like so many others before me has said, there's MUCH more to tell about these two wonderful guys. - Sweet
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Like so many of your other fans i really enoy your writing!! I've been crying and literally laughing out loud through out the chapters. You are SO good at making different characters, most of which has great depth, my only critisism to you is that the main characters are very simmilar to those in other pieces of your work. Which is rather sad, because you clearly have no problem with coming up with characters and making them multi layerd, so why 're use' the same characteristics on your main ones? That said i like them and your style of writing and i hope to read much more from you! - Sweet
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I sincerely hope you will finnish this story! It's so well written, and truly the boys deserve to get there story told. -Sweet
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The raw emotions you manage to put into words simply takes my breath away! Please don't ever stop writing! Sincerely, Sweet
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This story made me pause and reflect. With so vivid characters and your excellent penmanship one can not do anything but stop and ponder, and that is what a great story is all about to me. I'm mouring that it's over yet excited to see what the sequal might bring. Please keep writing and sincerely thank you for yet another epic story. - Sweet
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In the past isn’t always in the past
SweetAllis commented on DomLuka's story chapter in In the past isn’t always in the past
Please say you intend to come back and finish this story! Like several others i've read desert dropping and i loved meeing Luke again (one of if not my favorite character in that story) and was looking forward to see more of his continued journey. Please don't leave us hanging, this story deserves to be told. - Sweet -
SO happy to see you have continued this story. It's a story well worth telling and you do it exceptionally well! Can't wait to read more! -Sweet
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Simply Amazing! You have had me captivated from first to last word, i've laughed out loud and cried. Sincerely thank you for publishing this and i hope to read many more stories from you in the future! - Sweet
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Yet another great story written excellently by you! Really liked that you re used characters and setting from Gordy comes home!! Like others have said i too liked everything about this story, also the ending even if that seemd a tad rushed. Can one hope that Jed and Bill get their story told? Eagerly awaits "Carolina Dirt"! - Sweet
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I am so glad i stuck with your story!! The first few chapters i was on the fence but willing to give you the benefit of a doubt, by the end ...you Sir put me in my place! Exceptionally well written and i hope i will have the pleasure to read more from you in the future! - Sweet
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You have completely captivated me with this story. The charachters have come to life before my eyes. They've had me lauging out loud, wrinching, blushing and crying along side them through out the chapters (which i might ad i read in 2 sittings!). Please don't leave us hanging! Please continue writing!!!
