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  1. Enpassant
    I've really enjoyed the story so far, though there has been a few things that bugged me. For instance the way some of the staff talks about Silver like he isn't there. Detached or not, it's very unprofessional. And how could River shower in one of the residents showers? I work in a carehome and that's a big no-no. But as I've said, overall a great story so far!
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    Or maybe Oskar is just a friendly guy? Thanks as always, fo reading
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    Chapter 2 – I wonder how far this road goes. I couldn't decide if the situation was utterly horrible or if it was absolutely wonderful. The expressions on my friends faces told me that they thought it was simply hilarious. Damn them. “Fredrik, I'm jealous!” Astrid said in a voice much too loud for the occasion. “Shh! Seriously...” “I'm jealous too.” Robin said, ignoring me. “You never cuddle with me like that.” “Shut up you guys. You'll wake him up.” “Aaw, listen. His snores are so cute.”
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    Thank you I hope you'll like it!
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    The Fells

    Enpassant commented on Enpassant's story in Fiction

    Thanks His mother's story will be explained later on, dont worry Snowy Road is definitely a story I want to continue writing on. I felt kind of stuck every time i tried to write on it so I'm thinking a shorter story like this might be just what I need
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    Chapter 1 – Oskar Wahl. Who else? As the day came to an end and the last rays of sunlight peeked over the horizon, you could hear the sound of doors being shut and locks put in place throughout the village. For someone with no knowledge of the situation this would surely strike them as odd. You see, the village was nothing more than a small settlement, a gathering of houses and farmland in a long forgotten part of the Scandinavian fells. Why lock your door when the risk of trespassers is practi
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    The Fells

    Enpassant posted a story in Fiction

    Fredrik goes on a school trip to the Swedish Fells for some hiking. Despite his awkwardness towards Oskar, the PE class kid, coincidences seem to constantly push them into spending time together.
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    Snowy Road

    Enpassant commented on Enpassant's story in Fiction

    Hehe thanks I still have some fight in me so I'll survive. Probably.
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    Snowy Road

    Enpassant commented on Enpassant's story in Fiction

    Hehe thanks I still have some fight in me so I'll survive. Probably.
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    I'm not dead Just got very busy after christmas At the moment I'm juggling full time uni studies with two part-time jobs hehe. I have to sit down sometime when I don't have as much going on and reread my story, it's been on my mind lately so please continue to be patient I'm actually working on a shorter three part story just to keep writing but I'm not going to publish it until I'm done.(I really, really like it so far. Heh.) Look forward to that
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    Chapter 23

    Enpassant commented on Hasimir Fenrig's story chapter in Chapter 23

    This was one of the best stories I've read here in a long time! The end actually made me shed some tears of happiness. Awesome work!
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    Chapter 30

    Enpassant commented on Krista's story chapter in Chapter 30

    I loved the story but the ending kind of left me unsatisfied, I didn't really care much for Chandler though so his death(?) just made think "Oh well...". Still, there's plenty of stuff yet to be resolved, an epilogue would be nice
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    Aw, it makes me so happy that you like my story Happy holidays to you too! I'll try to get the next chapter up as soon as possible, stuff just seems to get in the way at the moment
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    Hehe, I'll totally grow to love the 'nerds', just have that kind of feeling Well, as the writer I like most of my characters, even Amanda, so... Thanks for reading ^^
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    Chapter 8 – A Weird Fellowship Knots were forming in my stomach as I approached the school parking the day after the fight with Amanda. More people were bound to know my secret by now, I hoped that the rumor at least hadn't reached the ears of the 'cool' kids. I'd thought everything over yesterday night and I realized that a lot of people wouldn't really care, it's not like I was the quarterback of the football team or anything, but I couldn't help thinking that some select few would try to hur
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    Thanks , I thought that both Amanda and Steve needed some 'alone'-time with Mark, hehe. I enjoyed writing both, even though Amanda makes me sad, Mark is starting to become a real person for me, it's kinda creepy how I have to remind myself that he's just a character haha.
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    Thanks , I thought that both Amanda and Steve needed some 'alone'-time with Mark, hehe. I enjoyed writing both, even though Amanda makes me sad, Mark is starting to become a real person for me, it's kinda creepy how I have to remind myself that he's just a character haha.
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    Thanks , I thought that both Amanda and Steve needed some 'alone'-time with Mark, hehe. I enjoyed writing both, even though Amanda makes me sad, Mark is starting to become a real person for me, it's kinda creepy how I have to remind myself that he's just a character haha.
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    haha damn it, I don't think about it and open office won't tell me if the grammar is wrong, only the word >_< Amanda is, in my mind, one of those people who just can't break the habit of thinking of themselves, even though there's rarely malice involved they tend to hurt others
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    Yeah, I don't want to rule out Eric just yet, we'll see what I'll do with him Thank you for always reading my chapter, hearts out to you!
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    The next chapter explains it Thank you for your review, you really seem to feel for Mark
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    Chapter 7 – Broken Bonds Amanda was looking at me, eyebrows raised questioningly. I still had the phone in my hand with Leslie on the line, I'd forgotten all about her though. We stood for a while, just staring at each other, before Amanda decided to break the silence. “Come on Mark, what are you doing?” She seemed to be in a hurry. I could see annoyance on her face but I didn't move. I continued to stare at her, searching her face for something, I didn't really know what though. Perhaps I jus
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    Chapter 1

    Enpassant commented on Sovereign's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Great chapter!! I love the character description(!), all the quirks they have between each other made me smile Will there be more chapters? (please please please)
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    Hehe yeah, go suspense! Amandas actions will be explained in the next chapter, I just need to figure it all out completely myself first, have some ideas though.
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    Wie! Glad you like the story! I wasn't really sure who would be the culprit when I started to write the chapter but I made a choice and now I'll have to try to explain the motives behind this mess
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