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  1. johnnyjon1

    Epilogue 2

    What a fine and endearing story. The depth of knowledge of Navajo places like Window Rock fashioned together with a adept feel for the emotions of a boy growing up in tough situations is evident in this wonderful story. Understanding the many different feelings of mothers and sons as well as lovers and lifemates make this such a good story. Thank you for this and especially for the tenderly warm ending. Will we find how Stephen's life unfolds in another story? Thanks again for all your efforts in bringing Palouse to us.
  2. What a very fine story. Thank you fr sharing your creation with us. I hope there are many more stories to come. Randy
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    Chapter 1

    Hi, I really like this story, especially how you have taken the time to develop Cole's character and led us all to the discovery of Jared's deafness. Cole is such a sweet hot tough guy. He has fallen hard, but will be the most true friend Jared ever had if he lets him. I can't wait to read more. Thank you for this super story.
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    Chapter 1

    I thought you did a great job for your first chapter of your first story! Of course it is your life, but truth is often the most engaging reading. I know it makes the story more enjoyable to me when I know it really happened. I know I am a bit behind your new career as I only found your work today, but I hope you are encouraged enough to write lots more. thank you for giving your time for the enjoyment of others, Peace, Randy
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    Chapter 34

    Great chapter! I am so glad Bobby and Ian are together. Poor Billy, he just gets crapped on. What happened with Chase? That sounded interesting! I still think Sam should just come out and tell Billy he is bi and has always wanted Billy's dick in his ass. Can't wait for the next chapter. Thanks for your good work. Randy
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    Chapter 33

    Billy needs to level with Trace at least to share that he is gay. Trace would accept that and I don't think he would reject him or end his friendship. He might find out more than he could imagine. Trace could have a bit of a queer streak in him. I wish I knew someone like Trace, I would love to have him for a friend. Billy needs to talk to his dad before its too late. His dad has not really reached out to Billy very much for someone who talks about Billy so much. Sounds like AJ has some really hot prospects. Why can't Billy just let go and feel good until the one boy comes along who will pursue him? Why does he have to always do all the work? He is cute. Sounds like Bobby and Ian are heating up. I would love to hear about their weekend. Thanks for the chapter, it is great.
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    Chapter 32

    Sunday was a really good chapter. I am glad Sam is still in the running even if he does keep hanging on the girls - I think he is still masking those primal feelings he has been denying for Billy. Hope something comes from that. I am glad Trace is finding his way into the story. The mention of that super cute Mikey was the first in forever. I miss him. Maybe Trace is the one, but so far all tease and nothing to show. I am glad Ian and Bobby are also getting back int things. How long before we find out what happened between them? The lines, "The hormones are always buzzing, but the heart strings can only ne pulled by a certain few. And even fewer can play a tune worth hearing over and over again," are brilliant! These few words capture the distinction between an friendship and a true love perfectly. There is so much insight in those two sentences. Thanks for sharing those gems. What about Jimmy? He was the first really. And what's going on with Lee? I am always dying for more when the day is over! Great, keep it up. Thanks, Randy
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    Chapter 16

    Such a sweet and exciting story. Nicely done. Thank you.
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    Chapter 14

    I am not sad Jace got the shit beat out of him, but why not get his ass arrested and pay for his crimes? Get the cops to arrest the Indiana thug too. Nicely done again. Thanks
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    Chapter 13

    It's time for Ruan to give Jace a reason to need medical help, or to need a lawyer. The story is really going well. Keep up the good work.
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    Chapter 11

    Maybe Jace will catch a staph infection and it will cause his dick to fall off.
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    Chapter 10

    fuck that bastard Jace I hope they hang the sob
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    Chapter 9

    Thank goodness Joel had the opportunity to talk to Ryan. Even Ryan's desire to trust can be used against him by people who are willing to lie and deceive with no concern about people's feelings and rights. Those kind of people justify whatever they want to do to get what they want. Selfish fucking ass holes. Kennedy is the worst, at lease Jace could say he is blinded by his obsession, but what does that fuckin bitch have to do with Ryan and Joel. She certainly has no chance with Ryan. She desn't deserve to be allowed in Ryan's presence. So, on to whatever these two asses have up their sleeves. Thanks
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    Chapter 8

    Fuck Jace he is just a common criminal. How did such a dumb ass even make it to college? Story is getting hotter though! Thanks
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    Chapter 7

    What a wonderful sweet romantic first time for Ryan and really a first time Joel ever made love! The sprinkler was a cute touch too. I hope their love grows.
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    Chapter 6

    What a hot couple Ryan and Joel! Great chapter.
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    Chapter 5

    The plot thickens. Jace is a bit over the top, but assault now he is a criminal. That is a lot to throw away as a college student, but a lot worse has happened. We'll see... Thanks, Randy
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    Chapter 4

    What a good story. Things are going so well, I guess this Jace idiot just has to fuck things up. Love the characters. The Mastersons are pretty accepting. Can't wait to read more. Thanks, Randy
  19. johnnyjon1

    Chapter 31

    Oh Billy sounds so sad. Robin is not his answer, but someone must be out there. He can't share Sam. Sam liked Billy sucking him, and I think he kind of liked doing stuff to Billy. He has to be at least some gay. Why can't he find it in him to let his gay side come out? Billy would give him more and far better sex than any bitch he can find. He is the best friend, the one who has been with him year after year through everything. Ian has the real thing for Bobby' It was so cute the way his love just finally forced Ian to take the step to let Bobby know he is gay and he loves Bobby. Sam could do the same and admit Bily has been the one for him all along. Fuck Brandon. The selfish boy will find himself alone one day and he will only have memories of the boy who would have given his life just to make him happy. Keep up the great writing. I am glad Ian and Bobby are back, I still miss Trace and Jimmy' Thanks again, Randy
  20. johnnyjon1

    Chapter 1

    KC, it is not often that a sweet and loving tale turns out to be true. I am glad the pain of your first love was able to help you recognize the real thing when it literally landed in your lap. Thanks for sharing such a personal part of your life, and I can only hope that it was just the beginning of a life of love. Peace, Randy
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    Chapter 30

    As always there are never enough of Billy's diary entries. There are so many hot side stories in Billy's. Brandon is really an unfeeling boy. For someone who was so worried about being outed when Billy first got together with him, and someone who was so hurt because Billy had his little indiscretion with Bobby even though it was kinda before he knew Brandon would be his boyfriend, Brandon showed no glimmer of care for Billy. Brandon's cold heartedness pushed Billy away and toward an encounter with Robin. The whole experience had great effect on Billy and he is having decond thoughts about meeting Robin, Billy is beginning to take control of his own life. Brandon would be so lucky to get his act together and grab Billy, but if not I think Sam should realize his best friend could easily be his best boyfriend. I love this series. It is HOT and sexy and full of the crazy things that are all part of adolesence, but it is also fullof tenderness and love. Billy will find his true love, and in the meantime his secret life will give readers like me tons of sexy reading experiences.
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    Chapter 2

    Hi, This boy Toni gets down to business! It is good that he latched on to Theo who needed someone to bring him out of his shyness. Toni's family sound like they are really an odd group, but a lot of fun. I'm not sure why smoking is such a big thing, especially since it is such a health risk and on the decline today. I look forward to more first Theo will experience with Toni. Thanks for taking the time to write. Randy
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    Chapter 26

    Hi, I have been following the hottest sexy boy Billy Chase for quite a while, but have not written a review. I didn't think you needed any incentive to write because you do iit so well. I am so glad Billy and Sam are back together. Billy needs Sam and even tough I am not sure he knows, Sam needs Billy. They did have some hot sex and I think Sam liked it more then he will admit. He did admit that no girl could give him a blow job as well as Billy could. I am beginning to miss hearing more about Bobby and Ian and Jimmy and especially Brandon. So, thanks for keeping writing and I hope you are doing ok too. Thanks, J
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