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  1. atorusandanode
    You write very well. The characters' dynamics are lovely. It's nice to see how things fall into place as their narratives merge.
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    The End of An Era

    atorusandanode commented on W_L's story in Poetry

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    Chapter 1

    atorusandanode commented on Andy78's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Gavin's death was cruel and unnecessary; I dare not fathom the trauma Michael would suffer henceforth. Was critiquing the rashness of young love one of the purposes of this tragedy? Nevertheless, very well-written.
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    Can't wait for the next part; please hurry up!
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    This is my favourite series; a vision of the successful reconciliation of family values, homosexuality and the Christian faith. I highly valued the 'life lessons' shared throughout the series.
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    Enjoying the story so far! Spotted an error, though: Zach didn't swear at Scott when he said he hated him.
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