atorusandanode
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I could feel Matt's pain. At least the truth is finally in the open, though.
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One of my favourite stories (I've read it and the sequel on your site). I noticed an error, though: 'It didn’t fail to escape Chase’s notice that Brandon...' - that's a triple negative
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I was thrown off by the conversation between Andy and his dad. I'm not sure that a lack of tangible affection from them is the source of his feelings of emptiness - maybe he really needs to feel complete acceptance. I noticed how Andy connected taking his phone away with not loving him - should that be chalked down to teenage naivete or to a deeper (maybe subconscious) link, in Andy's mind, between having to hide the secret aspect of his relationship with Matt and feeling unloved by his parents?
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At first, I was slightly put off by the description, which comes off as somewhat vague and suggests a plot-driven story. But the read turned out to be very rewarding indeed. If this is your first story then I think you must be quite a remarkable writer. I'm very glad to know there'll be a sequel - I will be eagerly watching for it. Thank you for writing.
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Sorry for your loss. I hope things get better for you
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The 'rape' story is still being used. What a shame - as long as they fear the repercussions, they will keep hiding. Certainly part of the blame lies with the homophobes, though. Perhaps I'm forgetting that they're just 14/15. Peers of that age can be vultures.
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Hmm! I was so glad to have a new chapter in this tale to read, and now that I've read it, I have one question: Where do you live? -loads sniper rifle-
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I don't know how to interpret Steve's ghostly presence but this was a good story. I look forward to the sequel!
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A very intriguing statement: 'You know the passion and heat you feel when we’re fucking? I don’t have that except during those times. Don’t let that happen to you.' What an acute insight - psychological reciprocity. Andy is withholding the emotional devotion which Dillon secretly withheld from him, permitting only that which is always present in sex - the physical passion. Hope he makes it out of this 'knot'.
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Very painful to read, but at least Andy now knows (rationally).
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That was wicked of you! I'm certain they'll be fine.
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Wonder how Willow could afford the scumbag. Good writing!
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Chapter Fifteen: Come Home
atorusandanode commented on Thorn Wilde's story chapter in Chapter Fifteen: Come Home
Glad Nick's okay. I'm surprised that their being outed came so early; hope Dave will be fine. Looks like an opportunity for Nick to take care of Dave this time. -
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David is wise.
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Tragic, but quite realistic. I feel for all the Caseys out there. Thanks for this chapter.
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The surprise appearance of Jacob's father was very cleverly written. Love the poignancy.
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Peter.. vermin. If you're doing your best to make the IRA masterminds look subhuman, you're succeeding.
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Megan sounds psychic It's good that someone's with him on the real issues he's facing.
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Oh, dear. I like the characters, but I hope they won't become a 'triple'. I personally don't believe such a relationship could realistically be a stable one.
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The 'fall of pride' is clearly foreshadowed here. A pity, but it's not uncommon in the lives of gifted people, I guess. I look forward to see how it all goes; how Micah grows from it.
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Very moving. Thank you.
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Goodness; this isn't getting any less suspenseful. Great job. So glad CJ and Mattie aren't alienated from their parents
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Hmm. He said 'first gift'. Does that suggest acceptance? But it also seems like a spiteful way to surprise them. Perhaps an ultimatum? Anyway, I'm hooked!
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This is one of my favourite stories. I'm glad you uploaded it here.
