TheGameMaster

What a freakin HOT chapter! I LOVED it!

I came on hoping fr an epilogue but nothing posted. Are we going to get one??? :-D where will the first chapter of the sequel pick up? I'm looking forward to it! I hope you're a fast writer with no distractions in life. Lol! Thanks for the story. Loved it!

I am so not a Selenay fan. Boo-hoo ... Her ambition has brought her infamy and now she feigns distress because no one but Erick can see that she has done so much to make sure it's not worse. Laughable. Let's get to the part where her head is on a pike outside the city gates. Not a fan at all. Gavin, on the other hand, is a lovely boy. He's the cure for the dithering nature that Selenay caused her son to develop. Glad he's taking things in his own hands. I always knew Dalen was a bottom! Lol!

I'm on board with the quick releases of chapters when action's afoot! Wasn't there a dungeon scene with Davina? :-D I quite liked that! >:-) (except for the Dvina part) lol!

It's been a busy day for Dalen ... And now a Mage fight? Where's Chapter 28 this morning?!? I need my fix! Lol!

Lord Farvenal, I presume?

I knew it! Selenay! I fear the trap she's setting for her son upon his return to Haven! I also fear for the troops down there ... An attack by the Mercs and blood-mages after Dalen leaves wouldn't surprise me. So I hope they were also making plans to defend themselves until they could Gate to Haven. So that unfamiliar tension Dalen felt with Lackley was lust! Lol! First admitting he's a shaych ... Next admitting he wants to be a Herald! Let's see him get past his mother!

Oh my! So who's in charge in Haven? Not Selenay, I hope! :-(

Leonard: What would you be if you were attached to another object by an inclined plane, wrapped helically around an axis? Sheldon: Screwed. I wonder if Dalen feels the same way with Rothar's order. Lol! But he's gotten a taste of command and a taste of the bond between Herald and Companion. ... Let's see how he develops. A thought came to me that even though Selenay doesn't seem to be Mage-gifted, I wonder if they tested her capacity with dark magic ... Perhaps she's the blood mage behind all this? It would be a fantastic hero-cycle storyline! Hehehe! And not to seem ungrateful, but don't you owe us another chapter for today? I missed my morning read. Have been off-balance all day! lol!

I'm enjoying this story! It really is a coming of age tale. We saw earlier how Dalen doesn't fit in well at home and was effectively thrown out, and now he is on his voyage of discovery. And I guess we'll see if he completes the hero cycle. His maturation is clear: constantly applying the lessons he's learned in the past and improvising along the way. Is he a shaych? Will he grow into his presumed destiny as a herald and, perhaps, heir presumptive? But I think you've been teasing us along the way ... Bart having to put hm to bed, Quinn being asked what his duties encompass, Paet offering to rub liniment on his sore muscles ... But all coming to naught! Hahaha! Thanks for the regular postings! I appreciate something to enjoy starting my day as well as my evening!

Hope things have settled down, DK! Looking forward to Rich Boy: Inheritance. :-)

"I wouldn’t let him Dakota me for an entire year." What a great line! I loved this chapter. I love the raw emotion, the intended determination, the toxic introspection, the skeptical reaffirmation, the brutal epiphanies, all leading to who knows what. If Corbin had a yellow WWJD bracelet n, he'd be twisting it the whole shuttle ride back. Lol! As for Amanda, she threw more cold water on Corbin than could have been in that kiddie pool with her incisive analysis of the situation. So Corbin stumbled. I blame the alcohol. Hehehe! I see strains of Odysseus here ... Each time he fell asleep or was not in control of his rationality, his men went off and did stupid things causing Odysseus setbacks time and time again. Luckily for him, and us, the span of this story is just a year. Lol! Don't take so long before posting the next chapter!

While it seems like Corbin and Pete are hopeless (since 11 chapters seems like an eternity) in all actuality, it's just been 3 weeks of their "real" lives. If we're frustrated, imagine the pure hell Corbin is experiencing on a day-to-day basis. Lol!

So is Rich Boy: Inheritance up somewhere???

Where's this morning's chapters??? Waiting anxiously to see what the demon lord unwittingly revealed to Worthington and what sorta bikes everyone's getting.