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Daithi

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  1. Daithi

    Chapter 36

    So Paul survived but they lost Ashley.
  2. Daithi

    Chapter 35

    Jason has lost so much..i really hope in the end it was worth it.
  3. Daithi

    Chapter 33

    Couldn't they have had a little bit longer even a bloody wedding night?
  4. Daithi

    Chapter 32

    That explains the many blank spots from the funeral.. Sad those to realize that this had always been in the works. So many deaths and more to come..but why?
  5. Daithi

    Chapter 31

    So if you put in a huge newspaper add detailing your wedding and reception you should expect a large turnout. Though the RPG's, machine guns and other weapons are a novel "gift".
  6. I loved this story. Cia captured so the haunting homesickness for want of a better word that Niel always carried around with him. For most of the story it was like you could taste his need to be home but on the other hand ,everything he did was subtle subterfuge because he had to stay hidden and three steps ahead of what or whoever was after him. You knew Niel was different but you don't find out til near the end why. When he met chris he's torn between his wants of what is behind him and what is in front of him. Chris is persistent and is just what Niel needs. Laughter, suspense, a little mayhem but the ending was perfect. It was a beautiful story and everyone should get the premium membership. Burden of Secrets is just one of the many excellent stories that you will find there.
  7. Daithi

    Chapter 30

    Investigate into perpetuity...In other words there never will be a trial until she can get proof and since there is none.... Poor jason.
  8. Daithi

    Chapter 22

    That teacher was wrong and Alex was right you shouldn't be allowed to change horses in mid stream or in the teachers case change how the marks are given. it's too bad that Alex wants to keep a low profile or he could have caused a big stink to get an equal grade. Three different probation officers and they all work differently. Alex and matt have more leeway than the others and the officer is on time.even for meeting and has a polite demeanor. Carlos is a Dick that gives him grief for not paying money to him but also gives them no option to get that money. Then you have Steve with bis giving short hours as well.at least Carlos is willing to work to make the money to not only pay bis officer but to help his family out as well. Steve I'm not sure but getting upset about different hours that the boys can't control seems kinda dumb. I would like to know why those doors were opened when no one should have been near them..i hope nothing was stolen out of them or that there were not people hiding in them to do damage after everyone left. Thankfully Al will have realized that since neither matt Alex or Ron could vet the alarm set they weren't the ones instrumental in opening the doors. But hopefully the solution they came up with fixes the open door problems. Looking forward to the next chapter.
  9. Daithi

    Weekly Wrap Up!

    Lol a long weekend made up so that every month during the summer season had a least one three day weekend for people to enjoy, hence the multiple names. None of the provinces care as long as they got the three days off.
  10. Daithi

    Chapter 29

    Rather unsettling chapter..not sure exactly what jason did to the gym or whether it was a good thing and i don't want to be that grandson when his grandfather finds out what he did.
  11. You know your good when you can fight evil with just a look and a sparkle in your eye
  12. Daithi

    Chapter 28

    He should have killed him when he had the chance.. The guy was more than willing to kill him. Disowning him wasn't enough.
  13. Daithi

    Chapter 27

    Oh oh heads are going to roll but whose....not sure whose rage is worse Jason or Romans.
  14. Daithi

    Chapter 26

    ooo Ronan is playing nasty, I actually like it when he plays nasty he does it so well. I am wondering too how they could capture Jason so easily h should have had the strength to get free or enough will to resist the drug n the cloth. I'm not sure what i think of the brother other than he has really bad timing.
  15. Daithi

    Chapter 11

    LOL a hormonal teenager is a father at fourteen and another on the way. I really really hope Riley has a birthday control program or the two of them will be able to fill their own orphanage size house before he hits 20 lol. Add to that he is now the head of the orphanage at 14, a little weird but like Dawson said the kids do respect him probably,you more so than an adult. Still just seems funny. I know they needed to move on but I hope the two of them will always have that little flicker of a candle in theirs minds that maybe their parents will be found. I feel kevin is not gone just on a hiatus he will be back. Good chapter looking forward to the next one.
  16. Daithi

    Chapter 41

    You can tell Scott really loves Zach. How many daddies would willingly undergo having his mouth washed out with real soap to prove a point to his son. Granted his hamming up went a bit far and backfired a bit but love was definitely felt by all. And really so cruel to leave us with a cliffhanger about the baby..mean mean mean!!!
  17. Daithi

    Chapter 5

    So two more races to Add to the mix.
  18. Daithi

    Chapter 4

    Another strand to add to the mix . I'm guessing the two new characters are hunters. those frost guys are gross lol.
  19. Daithi

    Chapter 3

    The hierarchy of the vampire seems a bit difficult to figure out right away. But I like the fact that that a black raven feather that flows into the skin dissolves and a flame tattoo is left behind. Devin's blood is quite dramatic it can kill or remake a person into either a fledgling or a feeder. Garrett I think is someone to watch out for. But my favourite outside of Devin of course is Alex of the dandelion hair. As to Anna I'm not sure whether she is a friend or a foe. Like this story so far.
  20. Daithi

    Chapter 2

    And lot of strands in this story. Looking forward to seeing how they all entwined. I hope we get to see what happened back at the house between the brother, the mother and the police officer.. Hmmmmm so Alex is a but more than a fledgling .
  21. Daithi

    Chapter 1

    I normally don't read a lot of vampire stories but this caught my eye and its intrigued me. I have a few chapters to catch up on but it looks very interesting.
  22. Daithi

    Chapter 25

    Ooooo there is bad timing and then their is really really bad timing. And I think this is the latter.
  23. Daithi

    Chapter 24

    Jason has been at work I see. That must be why no magic trace could be found. Since his magic is different than everyone elses. Somehow I don't think this is the end and they might have won this battle but the war is far from over.
  24. Daithi

    Chapter 54

    Great chapter. I'm glad Dolly made Josh sing I knew one of them would but figured on it being George. I love the mix of sons he does they are so apt to what he is doing. His song to Cesar was beautiful but it may not gave been the smartest thing gets did to be quite that out. The last fan will probably. only be a taste of what will come of that. somehow I don't think I would have wanted to be in that limousine when Daniel found out about that last fan. Hopefully in the next chapter we will find out the final tally both national from the 800 numbers as well as home town tally from the concert itself. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
  25. Daithi

    Chapter 23

    Okay how the heck did he survive that. I know he has amazing powers but that strong. Yeah okay
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