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Let me guess the detective is the dufus that had to be replaced when they had joey at the hospital. And he has a problem with gays so he is going to try to nail andy and/or joey along with JT. Btw how is JT supposed to kill his father when everyone seen him at the game or explain how the marks on his chest wrist and lump on his head can be explained. I could be wrong but the detective never did sit right with me.

Hen it rains it pours. When I read about the bleeding gums leukemia was the first thing that popped into my head..morbid or what.. But Sam ks right caught in time and a voracious attack with treatments can and will beat it. But with everything else happening its going to be hard on everyone. It's going to take a lot out of andy physically as well as mentally. I'm just glad he found joey before they found the cancer.

As soon as joey ran I knew what had happened. I'm also glad to note that he knew what happened and that he needs help to get over it. That's usually half the battle. Andy is lucky he didn't cracks or break a rib when he landed on the rock saving joey. JT was just starting to turn things around I really hope this doesn't screw him up. Coming home to murdered parents and landing in their blood can da number on anyone let alone a young teenager.

Well you said they were going to hang out for the weekend but I really didn't think you meant literally. I'm just glad that andy was able to catch joey as he went over, the odds of him doing that are low. And yes you do a excellent cliffhanger...literally. Great chapter.

I love graveyards, going around and reading the tombstones especially the older ones from a century or so ago. Granted not sure if I would appreciate the same things if i had to live and sleep in one. But I will admit one thing you are so right when you say the neighbours would be quiet. I liked this prompt it had your usually twisted flair for the hilarious and unusual. That little voice of yours is unique and we need to hear it more often .

talk about killing multiple birds with one stone. That explains the weird feeling a lot of the younger guys got when "Jaime " was around but it was sick that he tried to do the same thing to Erik then when caught and seen Dylan tried to turn it around on Dylan. I'm also glad TJ got his chance to show that he wanted to change, I;m pretty sure this was not the way he wanted the chance but hopefully it will give him a leg up. I like the description you gave of Jaime's face stopping before his body did that was funny. and no doubt will be very painful. Hopefully everything was caught before to much damage both physically and mentally was done to Erik. Great chapter can't wait for the next one. Yeah also can't wait to see how TJ's aren't take the news of him being gay and who is boyfriend is' somehow I do't think TJ is far off the mark with his mom's reaction.

I like writing reviews. I write them for me it gives me a way to kinda check in with what i see in the chapter or story the author wrote. Did I see what everyone else sees or if i saw it from a different perspective why did i see it that way. I also write a review for much the same reason to the writer wanting to see if what i did see was actually what the author wanted me to see. which isn't always the case and quite often iv'e actually had the author tell me that my view wasn't what he seen. I also think in metaphor I use a lot of them when i talk so quite often my reviews are my way of discussing what i read, which means a lot of times my reviews are long winded lol. So really in answer to your question does my review make me a better person ... not really maybe some might understand what i see and think more but not really a better person. the review is only one persons insight into what that person read. Just as the chapter or story is the insight of the person who wrote it doesn't mean one is better than the other just different in what they think and see.

gah - frustration or excitement tsk tsk - disaproval

I like the way this story is developing. I'm not really into a lot if religious backgrounds and such in stories but the visions and even everything us quite believable specially if you have the celtic background like I do. Add to the fact that there are a lot of areas in the Kentucky ky hills that are more of the older churches and backgrounds so it fits well in this story. The three boys are very close and specially with the background of andy both him and roger have probably had to grow up faster than most kids. Joey last few years would nature him faster than most kids so put the three of them together and they will,let be a force to reckon with. Add to that tbe support system they have electricity with tbe three parents, the pastor and the doctor and Nancy at the hospital and they should be able to weather anything that comes their way.

I understand why the high bail since he actually asked for no bail in the first place. And any judge that releases them is crazy and should lose his seat. Both of them told the judge they did no wrong that that the abuse is what is normal for punishment. Their son is wrapped like a mummy and will need plastic surgery to remove the scars. How the he'll is that acceptable punishment. He even has the pictures to show the extreme punishment

With the conversation with his father about the druid in his wife's background plus the gaelic nicknames and now the visions its going to be very intriguing how they all tie together. Though at the moment I think they are so wrong the bejeezus out of family and hospital staff.

Oops. Don't think that is going to go down well for JT

They were so worriedabout the adults reaction and they knew pretty much before the boys accepted it. This story is so beautifully written. It's fast paced but also so natural that it does to seem like a fictional piece. The emotion you write into this story are deep and very well done. Great story

I loved the answer andy gave joey to his question of why him. It was more than the usual physical reason that you would expect from horny teenagers. It showed a lot of maturity and love for such a young man.

There is problems with tbe preacher and then there is mcCrays why do I get the idea that there is something even more because of who andy himself is. Just guessing but a teen sith a net worth of millions and is being threatened by someone who was in court for extortion...yeah its going to get ugly

Well that won't go over too well, and is that the same McCray that was in the court room earlier....if it is he does seem to get around lol. Something tells. Even kts going to be a while,etc before these two boys will have a normal day.

Tbe money is an interesting factor to the story. I love the fact that everytime they turn around they are outing themselves. Wonder how Roger is going to take this bit of news.

Okay that dream definitely qualified as a night terror. I hope both these men don't let their history and second thoughts drown out a chance for them to grab a chance of happiness.

I'm glad joeys will be close to Andy and hopefully Roger is cool with the two of them. Cause joey is going to need all the support he can get.

Thankfully both of these boys have a sense of humour, something tells me they are going to need it in the days ahead. Really great chapter glad I caught this after quite a few chapters won't have to wait for postings hehe.

It was just physical abuse, but the fact that this started because joey was starved for affection. And he automatically took the older bigger persons word over his son was disgusting. I hate the fact that he will be in foster care but it's got to be better than what he has at home.

Oh now we know what kind of preacher joeys father is. Not the kind that are the forgiving one.

I hope joey's reaction to his father isn't an indication of what his home life is like. I'm thinking Andy has an interesting family history with the answer he gave to joeys question. You thrown quite a few hints it will be interesting to see how this little group works out.

I'm pretty sure that's not the way to stay in the background...but good work on the KO lol

I'm not sure how missed this but it has a great start. I like Andy.