Straight from the horses' mouth (no offence intended Mark) so to speak. The adventure(s) will continue, Yay, thank you. Now we just have to get this story back up to sixth or better. Come on shipmates, review your little hearts out.
It sounds like once Winkler was wounded, if I understand what paid off means, he was let go from the ship. Now robbed and reduced to begging for food. Granger, bless his heart, has given him a new lease on life. Now that is a Christmas present to be proud of. Great chapter, thank you.
The first of (I hope) many battles to come. Tested under fire, Granger was the warrior that his father thought he could be when needed. Wilcox gone, good riddance. Great chapter, thank you.
George has settled in. He is learning his job and his love life seems to be on track. With the exception of Wilcox all is good. This must mean something has to go wrong in the next chapter. Great chapter, thank you.
Quite the chapter, George got to lay a demon to rest. Now seems to be on the verge of serviving his first brush with death and being a hero to boot. Great chapter, thank you.
And this is the young man who stood on the quay in the beginning so worried about his big secret. I think you have set the tone for the rest of this story. Great chapter, thank you.
He is getting along with his Lt, with one of his two fellow midshipmen and charmed the Captian ( with his flute & french ), All in all he is off to a good start. Great chapter, thank you.
Great ending and you have left all of those needed in place to carry on with your next offering, Courier. What kind of a message or messanger could warrant a story named after it (or him)? Make that soon, soon please. Great chapter, thank you.
Are Mason, Seth and Shawn part of the Bishops' group (the bad guys), they don't come across as such. Where exactly are they headed and why? We need more answers! Great chapter, thank you.
Suddenly he has hundreds of cousins here, but back home there appear to a hundred or so cousins working for the other bad guys. This is getting complicated fast. Great chapter, thank you.
Dannys' equations just made the Fleet Admirals' day. Now his eye for shiny rocks, made him and his friends richer. Things are about to get interesting I would venture to say. Great chapter, thank you.
Identical enhancements, so if Danny is a genius, then it stands to reason that Tom is one to. Their importance to this story just went up a few notches. This is getting more exciting. Great chapter, thank you.
I am getting the impression that Tom and Danny are two of the main characters of this story. Just what are you leading us up to? Feels like the calm before a storm. Great chapter, thank you.
Great, the title is explained. We know the mission, its importance and that what ever the cargo is that they are carrying is vital to the war if not their very survival. Great chapter, thank you.
No matter how far in the future this is set, somethings don't seem to change. The good guys (Alliance) with the good times allowed complacency to creep in. Then bam, the bad guys show up and now they are almost up the proverbial creek with out a paddle. Great start, thank you.