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George has been blooded. Now they know if need be he can kill. It is a milestone, but a little sad. What is our gnomish creature planning on doing next, where and how will he strike? Great chapter, thank you.
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The old man toasted, the dark elf roasted. Two down, who or what will this gnomish creature send next? How does he trail them. Who is he? Great chapter, thank you.
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To never be able to settle down, forced to move and worse, never to know where destiny will force you to go. Our heroes have a hard life ahead of them. Will there ever be an end to their wanderings? Great chapter, thank you.
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George of Sedona II: Forging the Sword Sky Stone
sandrewn commented on David McLeod's story chapter in George of Sedona II: Forging the Sword Sky Stone
Using a meteorite to forge a sword, must be something special. Very clever of that dark elf and now the chase is really on. Great chapter, thank you. -
How did the old elf find them, if the dark elf is still looking for them. If I go by the Poltergeist chapter "THEY" (who ever they are) want both of our heroes. Why, Who, need more answers! Great chapter, thank you.
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Finally, some back ground. I'm still having a hard time figuring out exactly why are they after him. What threat was he to the princes' well being? Who are 'they'? Great chapter, thank you.
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Elven Archers - and a Troll
sandrewn commented on David McLeod's story chapter in Elven Archers - and a Troll
Now he has arrows that can kill, is this a sign of things to come. That dark elf is persistent and still on the trail. Where will destiny them lead now? Great chapter, thank you. -
Chapter 3: The Book of Heroes
sandrewn commented on David McLeod's story chapter in Chapter 3: The Book of Heroes
Is this dark elf the mirror who ate the boys' liver or one of his followers. If he is after George, that would mean , George is mage of the light, like his knight. Great chapter, thank you. -
Yes, I am hooked (line and sinker). I am drawn to the next chapter, as I fully expect to be to all of those that follow. Thank you.
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You posted this story years ago. As those before me, now at this time, I salute you on giving me a great read. I so look forward to the rest of this tale.
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So now its a three way and Caroline of course. One of their allies screwed them for food. Now they save another from capture. Amazing how war mimics life so closely. Great chapter, thank you.
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Things can't always be rosy. Food, one of those sad necessities in life. Granger might be able to live on lust, but the rest (most) would starve to death. Good chapter, thank you.
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Success in battle and a prize allows him to get rid Carmody along with any bad apples in the crew, good timing and lucky. Now they are set, his crew and ship confirmed and tested, on to India. Great chapter, thank you.
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George has set his style of commanding down. Hope fully all will fall into step with it. Fitzwilliam became the first to test this and probably would not be the last. Of more concern is Carmody, what to with this major threat with maybe a year at sea yet to travel, but solve it he must and quickly. Great chapter, thank you.
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Seems like a top notch 1st Lt and handsome to boot. Off to India for their maiden voyage, so much for easing into the job. Looks like every one will be learning as they go. Now we get to see how he does as commander of his own vessel, master of his own destiny. Great starting chapter, thank you.
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This is to date my absolute favorite story on this site. We have a ship, now the adventure can really begin. Thanks for all the enjoyment you with your craft have given me. sandrewn
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George is a father, all else pales in comparison within this chapter to this event.
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He has a fantastic estate, but much to do for his people there and I am sure he will do all he can for them. Travers posted and to a frigate he already knows and loves. Now what will George get after all this, it must be pretty special to. Great chapter, thank you.
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That makes 4 1/2 times he has given his speech so far (I count Fox as only a 1/2). He did his pitch for his French friends and it sounds promising. I like the way he was so casually able to win $10,000 pounds and not make much of it. The best news of all was Travers being told to come back to hear about what ship they were to give him (hopefully a frigate which would mean posting him). A great chapter, thank you.
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Back and in one piece. Only seen two people and already spun his tale twice, no doubt but the first of many more such sessions to come. Home just in time for the birth and finding all is well with the family. What next is in store for our young aristocrat? What a great story, thank you.
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People problems taken care of. Now we find out the ship is not so good in heavy seas, at least it is not a boring voyage. Now we get to see Georges' good side again, taking on a boy as his ward. Not twenty yet and responsible for not one, but soon to be two children. A great chapter, thank you.
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Captain of 120 gun ship, responsible for a fleet, now that is an eye opener and career enhancer. After this anything else they can give him should be a snap, that is if all goes well. Now another midshipman in need of some healing, did George miss his calling? Were there psychiatrists back then? Great chapter, thank you.
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I know we are following history, but this turn in events is sad none the less. Then to loose Shafte at this point was a real gut wrench, after all he had gone through, may he rest in peace. What is in store for George now? A bit of a downer but still a great chapter, thank you.
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Not an exciting chapter, but informative. Back to sea and with Travers (lucky yet again). More adventure due if I was to hazard a guess. Good chapter, thank you.
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Oh well, it couldn't last forever. It's good to see that his trust (the money helped) in the men was justified. Getting lucky again to have Nelson show up for his ride back. Yes, back to being humble Flag Lt. Great chapter, thank you.
