You seem to have miss the story review I wrote look at the end of the table of contents guess I the first to write a review.! I will be writing one for each complete story I read!
First, I going to say just how believable this story is. If you read this story, you're going to love it just like me. Give it a try and is if I am right but of course I am!
Two The dialogue is just the best and very believable, and just as the description which is just perfectly written and also believable.