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Albert1434

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  1. Well with this story I have written the whole story before posting any of it!
  2. LOL scared ya lol!
  3. I guess I should have to say this is just the first pass I read it many times and make improvements and fix things here and there.
  4. Sorry guys!
  5. This was the hardest chapter I have ever written took me 4.5 hours.
  6. I am writing the second book, and I think it is even better than the first one!
  7. That could be.... What was I thinking!
  8. And that coming from the King of Lies!
  9. I am never wrong thank you very much!
  10. Hey Lee good to see you today!
  11. Aloha All we had some rain seems fitting
  12. He is the one that put the hit on rocky's father! hahahaha
  13. Ok where is the safety panel are you list under staff? Great chapter.
  14. I am hoping it just doesn't feel good to me! I am just hoping he doesn't suffer
  15. NP hold the guac but I bet I could convert you! Craig would have like this dish sigh
  16. No I am in Nevada Reno
  17. Tonight were having for dinner Fully Loaded Pork Taquitos with Pico de Gallo, Creamy Guacamole & Hot Sauce
  18. Hmmm so it wasn't an accident and most likely redrum. Could be very bad!
  19. Thank you Drew that is nice you.
  20. Well I can see where this is headed. Run Rock Run!
  21. Albert1434

    Prologue

    Where could this lead hmm!
  22. You seem to have miss the story review I wrote look at the end of the table of contents guess I the first to write a review.! I will be writing one for each complete story I read!
  23. First, I going to say just how believable this story is. If you read this story, you're going to love it just like me. Give it a try and is if I am right but of course I am! Two The dialogue is just the best and very believable, and just as the description which is just perfectly written and also believable.
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  24. What can I say but that I have enjoyed every part of this story I think you have done an outstanding job!
  25. I will never lie to you if it sinks I will tell ya.
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