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  1. Albert1434
    Aloha All
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    Well you did it again you made me cry I just love this story. With perfect dialogue great description and a very good plot line. Well done! Jeff.
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    Well you made me cry again ok the medical was nothing less than brilliant you must have researched your ass off or your a doctor! I am so glad you didn t kill jake. I just love the way you handle ty and when he get to talk to jake!
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    That was just brutal!
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    Chapter 1

    Albert1434 commented on Albert1434's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I am so glad your enjoying it!
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    Stingy
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    I just want you to know that I don't read anyone's comments before I give my own so there just my thoughts! Misty eyes lol sigh.... another power and well written chapter...how enjoyable I find this story to be. With so powerful emotions and there is hope for Tyler and Jacob great dialogue and description !!!
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    Once again you made me cry shame on you lol. This was by far the best chapter to date, and I totally love it. Such a powerful plot so well defined and written with just lovely descriptions and dialogue. And the speech is so powerful and well written!
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    Wow ok you warned me that could make me cry and you did. This story touched some spots in me I thought I was over oh well so much for that. I love this story it a damn good read. I can see improvements as I read this story. And I can see hope for the two boys, from this dark earth hope my grow, and with that love may come! Thanks so much for this story! And for sharing!
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    Just like a bad nightmare does your bed still stink of cat pee😁
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    No it will not be your still here
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    Oh my God!
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    Run Turkey Run!
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    Aloha Gary
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    Well, I am impressed with this story I love the plot do darn good and well thought out!
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    Aloha Jeff
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    ABILENE, TEXAS
  18. Albert1434
    I see we meet again Mr. Boom Boom
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    Aloha All
  20. Albert1434
    Good work my pet!
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    lol
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    I ll tell ya Jeff I will hold him down and you can do his hair!
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