This was very moving story out of bad, good may come. It has perfect dialog and very well written disruption with yes, a clear and well thought out story line. I am sure if you read this story, you will love it just as much as I.
This was a very interesting chapter which I loved. Bruce and a 2-year-old omg he is far sicker than I thought! And of course, I am betting that Bruce will go on to do it again because as we all know is huge sicko!
Well, I understand that Rocky is upset however spilling the beans is never a good Idea. Rocky is a good kid but as rich as he is, he could have destroyed him legally taking out full page ads in the local paper! And Bruce's father is a complete Idiot, so the apple didn't fall far from the tree!
Once again, a just wonderful chapter which brings out powerful feelings which is what a good author can do! Use your weapon wisely. Great Description and Dialogue thanks for sharing~!
Poor Rocky what a mess damned if you do and damn if you don't Bruce needs to go boy jail. A powerful chapter just a perfect chapter and if I may well thought out!