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  1. Albert1434

    Chapter 4

    Oh my god this doesn't look good at all! What does Chase want and drag Micco 30 miles away for no good reason! This just stinks I sure of it!
  2. Albert1434

    Chapter 3

    The monster is coming, and its name is ARLENE! She is a beast and who know how she will rack her strength Apon the land. Special Agent Calhoun who should have waited for his partner so he could have done less damage. And so the death of Sam will has brought the FBI to the Rez which is not that surprising but what harm will they do? I just love this line! What I do understand, with the clarity of a wolf scenting a trap, is that whatever SA Calhoun and his partner from Tampa want, it will breed danger and trouble. This is just madness Micco would never harm Sam that I am sure of. I so enjoy your powerful use of English and how you use it. Coloring each sentence with perfection and powerful meaning! Thanks for sharing this great and wonderful story!
  3. And you would know of course!😃
  4. My, My Mr. Black kettle!
  5. Albert1434

    Chapter 2

    One thing I feel sure of is that Micco didn't kill Sam. But then who did! Was it for Sams money or perhaps some thing more personal! Only time will tell!
  6. Same here😁
  7. Tonight we had for dinner Creamy Thyme Chicken with green beans and mushrooms
  8. Clo you just live Fantasyland
  9. Your just plain nuts!
  10. She has been perving out for years and years! Even if he is old enough to be her father!
  11. That Gary is very cool of ya could deliver a cord of it to my house!
  12. Albert1434

    Chapter 1

    That was an amazing start to this perfectly written first chapter! Just so beautifully written you can sense the fear that Micco feels! Thanks for sharing this story!
  13. Thanks for the 10 cases of wine😁
  14. Tonight we had for dinner Sweet Chili Apricot-Glazed Yellowtail with Brussels sprouts and ginger rice😁
  15. Happy Birthday Terry!
  16. I think Spike that you just need a hungry attorney!
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