You should know that I have an incredibly open mind when it comes to reading stories! Besides the fact that you write such good stories, and these are your early ones, I can't wait to see how you develop! As to how old I am does matter, but I bet you could never guess how old I am!😁
I loved this story and so professionally written is it with simple perfect and powerful description and dialogue! Tony and Jordan love for is so tangible and believable you're just going to love it, read it and see if I am wrong but I am not!
This was just a perfect chapter; I was so glad that Jordan got better. I just loved this whole amazing story so well thought out and perfectly written. Thanks so much for sharing it!