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Chapter 7 – The Truth Shall Set You Free
Albert1434 commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 7 – The Truth Shall Set You Free
This chapter was like an amazing forest fire that can be seen from space! So, wounds are healed, and a fresh new way is opened for two wonderful hearts made whole. And it moved me deeply so professionally written was it. Thanks so much for sharing this with me. I am so glad that I found this story. I must read on! -
Chapter 6 – Never the Twain Shall Meet
Albert1434 commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 6 – Never the Twain Shall Meet
Well with tears in my eyes, which was an incredibly sad chapter, but I want to say you go Jordan you are great! -
Chapter 5 – Irreconcilable Differences
Albert1434 commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 5 – Irreconcilable Differences
Tony, Tony, Tony Me thinks you doth protest to much. Another great chapter well written and most enjoyable! -
Chapter 4 – The Winter of Our Despair
Albert1434 commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 4 – The Winter of Our Despair
Well, there may be bumps and things are never smooth it is just part of life. I know how it is, I lost my mother and father and what it is to live through these challenging times. And makes for a very real story! So up or down I am just loving this story! -
Chapter 3 – The Summer of Our Discontent
Albert1434 commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 3 – The Summer of Our Discontent
Tony and Jordan are sure enjoyable to read about and of course you do it so well. With great dialogue and great description makes for a very enjoyable chapter! -
Chapter 2 – It Was the Best of Times
Albert1434 commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 2 – It Was the Best of Times
Well, that was so beautifully written it was just perfect. I can't wait to see what will come of all this Thanks for sharing this story! -
Chapter 1 – My Special Friend
Albert1434 commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 1 – My Special Friend
I must say how well you wrote this first chapter which was simply perfect. I look forward to the next chapter! -
A good chapter
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Good chapter
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Maybe these two be will come to be more to each other!
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I just glad that Karl back people who care for him!
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I just hate George, he is a major jeck!
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Good Chapter
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Well that was interesting chapter
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So I am wondering if there is more to Paul and Karl I guess only time will tell
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Hmm I wonder what will come for Karl and George we will have to wait and see!
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I also don't like George and I can see no good coming from this!
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You are indeed getting better. This chapter was most enjoyable
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Even if he is seventeen when in his own country with no education, he would seem younger. And anyone can have wishes to help others and it's lucky that Karl was found by such people! And there is good in the world!
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A most enjoyable chapter, I am so glad that he was taken in by very nice people!
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What in the seven hells was that about?
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Damn poor Karl, we can only hope that the gods will send him some good luck!
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That was a very great and perfect begging to this story, with fingers crossed for Karl!
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I have read this story many times and I have never been disappointed! So darn good
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Man that was a great chapter!
