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Albert1434

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  1. Aloha Nick
  2. Aloha Bucket
  3. Woot 49ers won again!😃
  4. Albert1434

    Chapter 8

    Just a very enjoyable chapter. We learn more of Ethans trials and how everything had happened!
  5. Woot Aloha Dughlas i have very much missed you!
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    Chapter 7

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    Chapter 7

    Wow Ethan is one hell of a lucky guy to survive so much and to make it back to his true love and man you rock I just hope that you will continue writing!
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    Chapter 6

    Well, what should I say here oh yes you made me cry again but they were happy tears! Ethan isn't dead thank God! I love the spot story Yes a perfect chapter I loved every bit of it! So much has happened so damn good! I just love how you write amazing use of English just perfect!
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    Chapter 5

    Now do I need to be scared!☹️
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    Chapter 4

    That was so beautiful and loving I just loved this chapter. Sad it must be so short😢
  11. Albert1434

    Chapter 3

    Well, you made me cry in many places in this immensely powerful chapter. So Tragic is it I can feel their pain, so clear is it to me Aric and Ethan love for each other that this ending is so painful! And now Eddie and Aric to be together for Ethan's sake and because this is what Ethan would have wanted and it sounds like this will be done with love and caring so neither will be harmed. Thanks so much for sharing this painful and loving chapter!
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    Chapter 2

    Man I am just loving this story the results are just perfect. I am loving there perfect passion and there wonderful Fullment. Just perfect! Thanks
  13. Albert1434

    Chapter 1

    Well, here I am and what a fine view we have! I love your use of English and your description as well as dialogue. I can't wait to see where all this may lead! With fingers crossed I have many hopes, I do hope that I have guessed correctly but as fate would have it, only a matter of time.!
  14. Pull yourself up and enjoy a huge glass of Mango Habanero rotgut now if you start to see color have no fear it will soon passes, just have a nice piece of pizza the town is famous for! This great and wonderful written bit of madness if very enjoyable I am sure you will love it!
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  15. I have to wonder what you're drinking could it be Mango Habanero rotgut?
  16. Gary has written 34 stories you have read 3 I rest my case loser
  17. How true that!
  18. Lol Gary your an evil man
  19. Nick you should be reading all of Gary stuff! Shame on all of you that hang out here and don't!
  20. Gary this story is a great and wonderful tale! Thanks so much for sharing it!
  21. Read the book there are no Texan in the story or any amercians
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