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Albert1434

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  1. Aloha ManI am enjoying your story Man so good!
  2. Albert1434

    Chapter 1

    This can't be the easiest way to tell a story, keeping it interesting and not boring, but the truth is you're amazing and brilliant. And the storyline is clear and well thought out. With your powerful use of English, is very enjoyable I can't wait to read more of this story to that end I read on!
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    Chapter 1

    Thanks
  4. Albert1434

    Chapter 1

    1. As you have asked me, I read your other stories, and I well, however, I would like some direction as to what I should read next! 2. I have sent you a message and I am guessing you have not read it. I wish that you would! This is a truly a good beginning to this very good story. So, they cast out 4 young boys are they in fact scapegoats! Well, this is very well written at some point I hope to find out how this archaic ritual started. Are they trying to maintain the population at some level?
  5. Oh he is so good I have thank Frog for not wanting him kind of a fool!
  6. I am sure there will be more Terry
  7. He'll keep me and steve warm this winter!
  8. That's ok with me Nick Ill keep him!
  9. Albert1434

    Prologue

    This whole the promise of a great story. Already I am loving it. As in the story I read this show the power of your use of English which I dearly love. And I can't wait to see what happens, I have always loved Sci-Fi so I will wait no longer on I read!
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    Chapter 6

    His on loan from the Black Hand!
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    Chapter 6

    North Italy!
  12. A little something for Nick!
  13. Here find a great close up of Gary!
  14. I was thinking the same thing
  15. Wrong Drew has a private level just for him!
  16. Oh that is rich Terry
  17. So Bucket are you trying to tell me your bits are like a Banana?
  18. I wouldn't sign anything that Drew is involved with You will be fighting over this for next 40 years
  19. Oh Bucket that is truly enjoyable to know!!
  20. Thanks Raven that was most enjoyable
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    Chapter 6

    They were Kung Fu dancing woot! This was just a perfect wow chapter so very enjoyable! There is hope for Charlie and Brad, I can't wait to see where this may lead. Great description and dialogue in the fight scene can't have been easy to write! Hope those two Buggers enjoy spending time in Guido's cell with the 2000-pound boy popper! So much has happened I look forward to the next chapter!
  22. I will do just that!
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