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    Chapter 23

    Albert1434 commented on Albert1434's story chapter in Chapter 23

    Thank you for the review. Yes — those who remain loyal to England now find themselves defending a frightened nine‑year‑old king against a foreign prince who believes the crown should be his. Kaylen, Tomas, and Ronan have gathered the information Marshal needs, but the danger grows with every hour. Their challenge now is simply reaching Gloucester before the situation worsens and before Louis’s forces close the distance. The race back to the new king is every bit as important as the battle that may follow.
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    Chapter 23

    Albert1434 commented on Albert1434's story chapter in Chapter 23

    Thank you for the review. Yes — with King John gone, the weight of the realm now rests on young Henry’s shoulders, and every loyal man must move quickly. Kaylen, Ronan, and Tomas are riding hard to gather the information the new king needs, and they know Louis will not delay his advance. They intend to be ready when the French forces arrive, and the choices they make in these next moments will shape what happens when the two sides finally meet. More of that tension is coming as the story pushes toward the confrontation ahead.
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    Chapter 23

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    Thanks for the thoughtful reading. You’ve got the heart of the situation exactly right. With King John gone and young Henry newly crowned, William Marshal becomes the one man capable of holding the kingdom together. Louis can’t truly claim the throne while the rightful English king still lives, so the conflict now turns on speed, loyalty, and who can gather strength the fastest. A major battle at Gloucester is very possible. Kaylen and his companions are racing back to warn Marshal about Louis’s advance, and the force of archers Kaylen summoned from Baron Aldwyn may be the deciding factor. Whether they reach Gloucester in time — and whether their arrows can turn the tide — is the question the story is now driving toward. More to come as the storm closes in.
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    Thanks Chris
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    Thanks Dughlas
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    Thanks Clo!
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    I went to the Heart doctor today all is well
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    Knight and Squire The Crown in the Storm The first night of October tore across East Anglia like a curse, and the wind howled as though some fell spirit rode upon it. Kaylen stood beneath the dripping eaves of a half‑ruined barn, watching the storm scour the fields as if to strip them to the bone. Ronan and Tomas crouched beside a meager fire, striving to wrest warmth from sodden wood. They were far from the king’s host — scouts, messengers, watchers set upon the fraying ed
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    Aloha All
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    I have a question Gary why have you not answered the poem comments?
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    Aloha Gary!
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    Aloha All
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    Happy Easter 😁
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    That is funny Tonight for dinner were having Weeknight Steak au Poivre with cheesy potato wedges and a salad!
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    He is so cute when he is like this!
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    And you should talk!
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    Something for Chris to look forward to!
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    Classic Aussie Hamburger Bottom bun Tomato sauce Lettuce Tomato slices Beef patty with melted cheese Grilled onions Beetroot slices Bacon Fried egg Optional pineapple Top bun Press gently, take a deep breath, and accept that it will be messy.
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    Aloha All
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    pea soup with a meat pie floating in it!
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    And yes that what they call a fish and chips shop.
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