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I am writing Book two now

That was what I said you loser!

You do not know what you're talking about!

Yes he repeats himself but then he is more then a little bit drunk!

Sad time to be doing that!

Aloha All

That is not good! Hope he is ok.

Hollywood and Vine The After Party Johnny stood, the applause still echoing faintly in the grand hall, and picked up the Oscar from the table where it had rested beside half-sipped champagne and folded programs. The gold figure was cool in his hand, heavier now that the adrenaline had faded. Violet was already on her feet, her gown catching the light like a ripple of silk, Vincent beside her with a quiet nod and a hand on her back. They moved to

Happy Birthday Bucket!

A strong, emotionally charged chapter that cleanly bridges August’s old life with his new one. The opening scene with Albert is tense and revealing — a final look at a father defined by ambition, control, and emotional distance. August’s quiet defiance and internal clarity make the moment satisfying without being loud. The shift to the Crawley homestead is beautifully handled. Warmth, bustle, humor, and genuine affection flood the page, creating a stark and effective contrast. Lorraine and Roland shine, offering August the kind of family he never had. The sendoff is tender without slipping into sentimentality, and the canvas‑cover moment is a perfect blend of practicality and love. Once on the road, August and Fletcher’s intimacy feels earned and grounded. Their dialogue is warm, playful, and deeply human, showing how far they’ve come and how ready they are for the life ahead. The birthday exchange is a lovely touch. Overall, this chapter succeeds because it’s emotionally rich, well‑paced, and thematically clear. It marks a true turning point — the moment August steps fully into a future built on love, partnership, and chosen family.

I totally agree

Aloha All

Your not pure anything!

I think that's a better Idea for you!

Spike and Drew!

Clo let's look at your list! How dark is that!

So how was the party Chris?

Aloha All

I have to agree with Chris! Does not look innocent to me!