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    Chapter 21

    I don't understand. Isn't Corey's father a teacher and coach? Why do they have to live in a hovel. Does he not get paid?
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    Chapter 16

    In regard to the Miranda Rights question, that did not start until 1966, so the police did not have to warn Johnny. I noted one small detail in chapter 12 that was not of the period. When Johnny was calling Tony, you wrote "I punch in Tony's phone number." Touch tone calling did not start until 1963. Other than that everything seems fairly accurate and I am enjoying the storey.
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