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Ruth and Jacob will make a lovely couple and they are being such good friends to Isaac. Jon and Sean seem nice, probably just what Isaac needs.
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Poor Isaac, nightmares are terrible, hopefully dreaming of Caleb is a temporary thing. Living in the community must have left Caleb very inexperienced in sex and especially in homosexuality. He´s going to need some time to come in terms of being gay. Hopefully he´s family will be able to help with that. Can´t wait to meet them all
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I must once again agree with Jaro, you are a great writer and this story has been so intense. Throughout this story I´ve cried and been worried, but this chapter finally made me smile. Isaac has a large family, and I hope they are nice and welcoming.
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Absolutely wonderful ending to this lovely story I´ve really enjoyed reading Kei and Alex´s story. Must confess that I was a bit worried how this would end but proposal in the moonlight is brilliant (and so much better than killing off your main characters ) Thank you for this beautiful story
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Especially when they do it before retiring from sports.
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http://yle.fi/uutiset/finnish_olympian_comes_out_finally_i_can_be_myself/7065062
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This chapter gave me shivers. Caleb is so evil. Who blames a child for killing his mother and keeps hating him for it and trying to kill him again and again? There must be a family somewhere who would want to get to know Isaac, surely his father couldn´t have been without a family. That´d be cruel, Isaac needs family and I think preferably people outside the community. Better go read the next chapter to make sure you didn´t just kill him off
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Catherine is nosy and nice, simply a lovely friend. Frank should definitely go out on a date with Chris. Great chapter!
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I couldn´t help but cry when Isaac told Rick what had happened to him in prison. It wasn´t unexpected but the way you told it was very emotional and I could feel the hurt in Isaac´s words. Poor Isaac, he had so little knowledge and understanding of real world, there was no way he could survive life in prison. He didn´t know what to expect from other prisoners, what they might be capable of.
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Jayden is such a sweet, little boy. Wanting his new friend to have more friends. I have a feeling that the grandmother will be back. How could Isaac go back to the community and be happy there? The community is the only thing he knows, the only family he has, but they turned their backs on him when he needed them most. Caleb probably run off with a lot of money and would live happily ever after in a sunny place, only this is your story and those things rarely happen. Surely Caleb will be back.....
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Poor Isaac! It´s terrible to be in so much pain and to be so desperately sad. Life in the community doesn´t sound good or loving and the way their deserted, expelled Isaac is just awful. Looking forward getting to know more about them....there has to be something very wrong with Caleb. Rick and Katie sound lovely and they are treating Isaac so much better than the others at the hospital. Hopefully they´ll be able to help him. I agree with Jaro, your writing is very good and as you can see I like reading your stories
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One of the weirdest and most horrible dreams I´ve had recently was few months ago. I was standing in front of a chest of drawers and I knew if I opened the top drawer I´d find my cats in there. For some reason I knew they´d be dead and I could see them dead and somehow their deaths were my fault. I woke up and my heart was beating so fast and it took me a long time to calm down and to be able to go back to sleep. It was so horrible.
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Such a wonderful story I love happy endings and Daniel and Josh loving each other and getting married definitely is a happy ending
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Such a sweet chapter after all the horrors in this story
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That was a rather interesting therapy session. Glad it worked and Daniel is better again.
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Sue looks like the last hope for Daniel to get better again and she seems very good at what she´s doing.
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Working it out 1, 2 and 3 by Don H https://www.gayauthors.org/story/don-h/workingitout1 Probably not what you are looking for, but there is a plane crash and one person´s family is killed, but it´s not based in New Orleans. Great story anyway
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I´m so glad Daniel allowed Josh back into his life and hopefully that isn´t a temporary thing. They belong together and Kate and Jake are there to help them. This really is a great story.
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Things are different in fictional stories, but in real life when you see someone unconscious and obviously hurt, you call an ambulance and don´t take them home with you. Daniel´s lucky to have found people like Kate and Jake, and I´m glad he agreed to see Josh.
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Just when I though things couldn´t get any worse for Daniel, you made them just that. I hope they´ll catch Rico and his pals and put them away forever. Kate seems like an interesting character.
