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Colt is still very insecure about everything and no wonder after living with a father who practically has denied every fun from him. It´s nice that Colt is making new friends
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They are settling in living together quite nicely. Leo obviously enjoys having someone there and Colt is happy to stay. Wonder what happens when Colt starts making friends at school and wants to bring them home, how will they explain their living arrangement. Doesn´t Leo have any friends? I got an impression that his family isn´t around. Should just read on and find all the answers
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Colt was extremely lucky to meet Leo in that book store and not someone who´d taken advantage of the situation.
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I Don't Understand Why He Didn't Say Something.
Suvitar commented on Nephylim's story chapter in I Don't Understand Why He Didn't Say Something.
How easy it is to ignore someone or push aside not everyone can look after themselves, but luckily it´s not always as final and heartbreaking as it was for Alex. -
Looks like an interesting story. Leo seems like a nice man and Colt obviously needs someone to look after him.
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I have some ideas too, but I´ll wait till the next chapter to see if I´m right. Only hoping Chris won´t break Frank´s heart. Lovely chapter
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I´ve enjoyed reading all your stories so far, I love the way you write and make your stories so easy to read. This story was one of the best you have written (that I´ve read), if not the best. There were drama, love, fear, remorse and a happy ending Thank you
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Absolutely beautiful chapter...and yet so scary For some reason what Ash´s dad did, was exactly what I though he´d do. He wouldn´t have gone looking for Ash if he didn´t want anything to do with him. He loves his son and in the end wants him to be happy.
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A truly horrible situation for Ash, he´s in a lot of pain, not even totally conscious what is happening around him. I hated when Josh left Ash in the morning, he should have comforted him more, talked to him, but instead he broke Ash´s heart. Then came the headmaster who did much the same, didn´t even try to listen to Ash, just telling what he should do. But I do like how you write and make everything seem so real and in this case so painful and heartbreaking.
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The way you described Ash´s pain made it feel so real...and horrible. He´s been hurt so badly both emotionally and physically, totally understandable that he needs Josh to be there for him, when no-one else will. It´s just that Josh doesn´t really seem convinced that he should be there for Ash. Brilliant and so well written chapter
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So things were bad and then they got worse for Ash Really don´t like his father, throwing out a son who was almost beaten to death, not a nice and loving thing to do for a parent. Josh will be in trouble for taking Ash to his home but I´m glad he did Wonderful chapter
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Another Sunday morning http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=YuM3SteeAgY
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They should have thrown away all the old Christmas decorations and get new ones, something that would be just theirs and start truly new traditions for them. Jack reminiscing past Christmases with Randy and looking old photos doesn´t do any good for Bernard´s self-esteem. He is still very fragile and insecure. I hope he is wrong about Jack still loving Randy. It should be all about them two now. I knew Molly would except Bernard being gay, she´s a great mum. Wonderful chapter
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What kind of headmaster says or even thinks that "it was for the best" when one of his students gets beaten nearly dead? No matter what the circumstance, there´s no excuse for saying that. He seems glad that something happened to prevent Ash from coming to school anymore. Whenever the victim refuses to tell the police who it was, I´m left wondering why. Probably fear but it´s not right. Great chapter
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If you beat and kick someone unconscious, you don´t get to say you didn´t mean it. Of course you meant it You wanted to hurt them and if they ended up dead, saying oops didn´t mean it, just isn´t good enough. I really don´t understand the need or want to hurt someone who is somehow different from you. Why not just ignore them? I know it happens and it happens a lot, but it is always so sad, waste of lives, both the victim´s and the person doing the beating. Rant over Well written chapter. I better read on and check how badly Ash is hurt, surely you didn´t kill him off this early
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Looks like another great story It´ll be interesting to see where Ash´s and Josh´s relationship goes. Will it stay professional or move into something else. It´s always so depressing to read stories where parents are demanding their children to live their lives as they are told to. Like nothing should ever change
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A Story to Touch the Heart
Suvitar commented on Nephylim's story chapter in A Story to Touch the Heart
It took me a long time to finish reading this....once again your story made me cry and I mean really cry Beautiful story of two wonderful and special people I truly enjoyed it (never mind the tears). -
Wonderful ending to a wonderful story
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Beautiful story and you proved that there don´t have to be any big drama to make a good story.
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Such a lovely story with great characters. It was so funny when all those ladies started harassing Jack only a week after the funeral, he was lucky to have Larry come to rescue :Pand I´m glad there´ll be more to read
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Already going to live together but somehow it doesn´t seem too hasty decision but it will take a lot of adjustment especially from Bernand. To live with someone when you are used to living alone won´t be easy. They love each other and Jack´s a lovely man, so I´m sure they´ll manage. This is a great story...just wish the chapters were longer
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Lovely story. I like to think his wife is understanding but I´d like him to find a man to love...that´s clearly what he´d like or at least that´s the impression I get.
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The first werewolf story I´ve ever read and I liked it I´ve been avoiding anything with tags like fantasy, vampires, werewolves.....perhaps I should try another one....
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That was sweet
