Suvitar
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Wonderful chapter and definitely not too long....I would have read more Josh is enjoying his life as Jacob...no-one bullies him, there are people who truly care about him, he has friends and loving family. It´ll be hard for him to go back his own life. If he tells Cody about him and Jacob, then there´ll be one more person to know and there are already Phillip and Ian getting suspicious. They can´t keep this up for much longer. I´m sure Jacob´s family will welcome his brother but Josh´s parents probably won´t be happy about it. And they won´t be accepting Josh as a gay son. Looking forward reading more
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Trey´s dad had things figured out and now Trey changed all that, understandable that he is a bit upset and worried about Trey and Mark living together. Another great chapter
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Such a lovely story Several generations of men and one gun
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Bernard is really insecure and that´s no wonder after the men he has met and who have turned him down. He´s lucky to have found someone like Jack who clearly cares for him and loves him. They are so sweet together Oh, I caught up with the story and now have to wait for the next chapter. I´ve really enjoyed reading this
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Almost forgot. One of my all time favourites is Evelyn Waugh´s Brideshead Revisited.
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E.M. Forster (1879 - 1970) comes to mind. He wrote a lot, for instance "Maurice". Great book and even the film based on it is good.
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I hope Bernard´s mum will take the news well Bernard and Jack seem good together. Bernard´s self-esteem still needs a lot of work but he already seems better.
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Must say I too was surprised that his mum hadn´t cleaned the apartment but it was good for Bernard to see it all and think about it again. Jack is great, hopefully he´ll stay around, Bernard wouldn´t know how to handle disappointment.
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What a disappointing life Bernard has had and he doesn´t seem to be happy about anything. He should find a new, different job. Perhaps go to school, meet new people, take up some hobby and exercise. I know that´s not easy but perhaps now with Jack´s help
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Bernard´s mum is great and rather colourful character Worried about her son and clearly a loving person. Bernard is unhappy about himself and he needs counselling. Losing weight and feeling more optimistic about himself would be good.
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Poor Bernard! He seems so sad and miserable, I´m glad he was saved and hopefully for good this time. Jack and Nancy are great and so concerned about Bernard. On to the next chapter
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Looks like a another good story
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Very intriguing story Can´t wait to see if my theory about the brothers and their father is correct I hope this has a happy ending for Frank, he more than deserves to be happy
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Story Review Featured Story: Love In A Chair
Suvitar commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Gay Authors News
I try to avoid spoilers, so I didn´t read what was written above....but I checked the story and I found that the story is in process and haven´t had any new chapters since 2011. I´ve read too many stories that haven´t been finished and it´s not fun when everything ends with a cliffhanger. -
It´s never been on our TV so I´ve only seen some odd episodes, but it´s a funny show.
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I remember watching The Benny Hill Show. Could it be that?
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So sweet They really have come a long way from where this story begun
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The 2013 Gay Authors Readers' Choice Ballot and Voting
Suvitar replied to TalonRider's topic in The Lounge
I agree! It was hard enough to decide which to nominate and now to choose the best one. -
Longer they keep up this swapping lives, the harder it´ll be to adjust back to their own lives, for both of them. They have done and said things other doesn´t know about. They think it´s a big, fun adventure, and hopefully it won´t end too badly. Phillip obviously is suspicious already, but there´s no way he could know what´s going on. But one day there will be someone who sees them together.... Great chapter
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Lovely chapter and a great ending to this wonderful story I´ve really enjoyed reading it Looking forward to a spin-off
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I agree, you should continue this story, it made an interesting beginning
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Such a sweet little story
