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Layla by Derek and the Dominos http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=uSquiIVLhrQ I do love the unplugged version by Eric Clapton too http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=ZtxO1gwbHPQ#t=12
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Such a horrifying beginning to your story. Joey and Danny have been through too much, people can be so evil. Very powerful story.
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Such a lovely story
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Lovely story with a beautiful ending
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Chapter 5 Grief Reactions...
Suvitar commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 5 Grief Reactions...
Poor Cody! He´s the only one I feel sorry for. Drake knew what he was doing and wants Maxwell not Cody. Maxwell wants Brad not Drake. There´ll be three miserable men in the next chapter. Can´t stop reading now. -
I´m starting to feel sorry for Cody and have a feeling that he´ll end up hurt...and I hope I´m wrong about that.
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Chapter 2 'Guilt' Riddance...
Suvitar commented on Naptowngirl's story chapter in Chapter 2 'Guilt' Riddance...
Lovely chapter, but even more sad than the first one. Great characters. I hope there won´t be any trouble with Cody and Drake. -
Such a sad beginning to a story I do hope there´s a happy ending when I finish reading this
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So far, so good They just might get away with it all I feel bad for Josh, his mother seems very cold, no hugs, no touching Great chapter
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Great chapter and I do like it without fighting and big drama I was half expecting something to go wrong at the dance, glad it wasn´t anything worse than few girls being very unkind to Mandira. Loved it when Matt and Nick where talking about Alan and finding out about how he feels....and then Nick said something like now that we know.....loved how he included Dave. If Nick knows then Dave knows too.
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Great chapter I do hope Eli´s mother don´t scare Noah too badly, he seems so vulnerable
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They are so sweet together You do keep us waiting for the meeting with Trey´s parents
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Absolutely wonderful chapter They have both been through so much and it´s good that they could have this opportunity to get away together and find a way to start to get along with each other and Kei´s condition. What Alex said at the pool was great and needed to be said. They are still so young and all this is demanding a lot of them and will take a lot of understanding and time from both of them.
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Chapter 6 Goodbye's Aren't Forever
Suvitar commented on zanoGreen's story chapter in Chapter 6 Goodbye's Aren't Forever
Lovely story I´d like to read more -
No need to go to Dallas, Jo´s hometown sounds like a much better option, for both of them. I really like this story, but you need to learn the difference between you´re and your, it´s very distracting when you get them all mixed up, along with few other typos.
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They do seem rather cozy together and Jeremy really needed someone there to get through a tornado. I´m sure there´s work for a nurse somewhere near Jo´s home
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Chapter 3 Long Kept Issues
Suvitar commented on zanoGreen's story chapter in Chapter 3 Long Kept Issues
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Changing the POVs worked great in this chapter Both have a lot of misery from their pasts, will be interesting to find out how they´ll manage it all.
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Looks like an interesting story. I don´t mind changing the POV during the story, but I do find it annoying when it repeats everything that already has been said and doesn´t really add anything new to the story.
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So sad and yet good as well. When ever I read a story like this, I always wonder what kind of parents throw their own child out for loving someone. I know it happens in real life, but it is so cruel.
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Lovely chapter as usual I´ve started to like Jackie, she does take care of her brother, and I mean that in a good way. She´s been very annoying in the past, but at least at the moment she´s being very nice and caring.
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Sweet story! I hope they had a lot more Christmases together.
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Wonderful story! I really enjoyed reading it, would have wanted to know more about John´s and Jeremy´s pasts but this was good too.
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How sad...they both have found someone they want to be with, but John is being cautious, perhaps too cautious at this point and Jeremy doesn´t have the experience to do anything about the situation. I keep wondering about Jeremy´s family and what happened to him before he met John.
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Such a sweet chapter
