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  1. Polly

    Chapter 4

    This doesn't surprise me at all. -_- Alex is a wimp and always will be. I mean he has some serious issues concerning how he treats his partners and I didn't like him from the time with the Wade and Mat experience. I was really dissapointed in him and he kept on degrading himself in my opinion from then on. I'm sorry for JJ. He's not my favorite character, but I think with his childhood and the things from his past, he gets a lot of leeway from me. He deserves far better (although I really can't imagine the person who can actually make JJ fall seriously) I kinda wish that Alex suffers for the rest of his life. ..not in a malicious and vengeful way, but I don't want him to have a happy life because he just kinda deserves it. He can change so many things and grow a set of balls and be a really strong character, still with all of his limitations....but he just isn't and the reason for that is just himself. The Family shouldn't cut him off or something, but make it clear that he seriously fucked it up completely and especially with his background, he should have known it better. Where is his education and experience from this kind of social life? I kept on hoping that he would show even a shadow of Wades intelligence, but he didn't show me any kind of it, not even a shadow. Weeell I am excited for the showdown , where Brad sees what an ass he is, although how he can repeat this process for years and years and still be an ass, is beyond me. I also think that it would be nice to see a new character, one that kind of combines the personalities of JP and Steff and has the thoughtfulness of Will I actually think that would be a really good partner for Will, maybe even be completely gorgeous and look like he's 24 although he will be 16 or 17 I love this story and I laugh and cry with it every time Great respect!
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    Chapter 29

    I really hope that Shawn doesn't plan to go to Martin now and yell at him all the things he already knows. The smart thing to do would be going to his house get the collar of with whatever tool necessary, then pack a bag for an emergency and ask Casey to do it real quick too AND then confront Martin. I mean he doesn't really think that just because he will storm in all pissed off and scream some insults at Martin, that A-hole will suddenly realize what an A-hole he is and take that torture device off, does he? I mean he is a man who mentally and if you will physically abused Casey for years(Shawn suspected it since he met Casey and observes his bahaviour), treated him like a dog Shawn himself said, and now he wil suddenly change his behaviour because Shawn sais so...? Nope, not a chance. So the only reason I would confront Martin is to let off steam and let Casey say his part
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    Prophylaxis

    Ok now we are gonna be thrown in another realm/ world with characters I'm really suspicious of. I see a lot of possibilities and weeks of shivering in expectation to what can happen next I can't wait for the story to continue :read: Keep up the great work because all of us have better days when a chapter of a loved story is released
  4. Polly

    Chapter 2

    Yep definitely a jerk. You would think someone as intelligent as that and someone who had such a compassionate lover would be somewhat understanding and, if not affectionate, than at least not sadistic. He lost his lover but the boy lost a father and this jerk is hardly enough to replace that loss or make it more bearable. I understand too well what it means to loose someone like that, but he is still an asshole years later, not just in the beginnig where the emotions are really raw. I hope there will be some change there. Really interesting story and well defines characters
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    Chapter 17

    I believe that I'm not a violent and cruel person, but I wanted Lester to suffer far more than whatever happened to him. It didn't even have to be that long. Just a week of fulltime torture and mental and physical rape would be fine with me. I mean the reader gathered so much hate for this character and he needs an outlet for it now. Simple death isn't enough. But this is in no way a critic of the story or the author. It is really well written and I think that my feelings, which are described above, really show you how much you get pullled into the story, how much you grow to love or hate the characters and also how well the author is able to write and express the story and its world, that you just can't wait for the next chapter to arrive. Keep up the good work!
  6. Again a beautiful continuation of one of my favorite stories here on GA I must also say that at some point Matt fell frfom ma graces ( ) and I so hoped he would come to his senses. Now I hoped the same for Wade^^ It was engaging, emotionally captivating and written with great humor and a great thought for every character and thier own perspectives. With great anticipation and admiration, I await your new story and I really hope that Brad can see that there's more waiting for him Thanks for the great job. (all of you) PS: I hope I'm not the only one, but I fear for Will ( I kinda don't see a future for him and Zac...I don't even know if I want to be wrong but I know you will surprise and draw me in anyway )
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    Flux

    I'm really excited about the future for these chracters^^ I'm not so sure for will and zac sry, I wish they had someone just for them. and I'm cheering for brad !!! I so hope he will fall in love again Maybe it's time for a new character ...either way I can't wait for the story to continue. I'm really hooked on it
  8. Polly

    Lost Inside

    wow yuri sure remembers the right things who thought that he is the one who calls the shots in the relationship I alos want to know who the other tiger is. How can he even say mine, I mean the markings and the smell should be telling a completely different story, its against instincts (Iguess) but it makes everything more interesting Hope to read more soon. I really love your stories
  9. Polly

    Chapter 9

    And here I thought we are finally going to see the adorable and sweet Buzz-Jed-awkward-Get to Know-show and BAM !!! there are hunters !!! Why didn't we know that there is even such a group in this series? Where the f*** did they even come from? If they give her as much as a scratch, I'll kill them!!!!!! I don't know how but I'll find a way
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    Chapter 13 - Pain

    that sure was a sudden change, I mean if you're a psycho of that level you normally don't hide it that well, at least not from a former victim because they're hyper sensitive towards these kinds of things. But well I hope there is a satisfying ending where adrian will get his reward for the fucked up life he had and the psychos deserve far more than just death, killing them of is too easy and hinestly it's over too fast. I hope that the story will continue soon
  11. I really love it !!! Is there a way you can continue the story?? I really want to read the rest and right now you can say that HERE the plot is finally beginning. It really is interesting and exciting. I really don't know what to expect or in which direction this is leading but I know that this story is interesting, exciting and capturing. You fall in love with the characters quiet easily and you can't wait to read more....which is exactly how I feel right now!!! Zannen I really hope you read this and know how amazing I think your story and style is and that you keep on writing this story it would be a waste otherwise just :thankyou:
  12. Polly

    Introduction

    I've just read the first chapter but I can say that I really like the story and Caden^^ The style is also quiet good because it doesn't tell a lot but just enogh to keep the suspense and also the fun. I saw that it is in process but the last entry/upload was in 2011 or something but I reaaaaally hope it will continue. This story already captured my heart and interest <3
  13. I really like your style the vampire angle isn't overhelming or unrealistic. Now some questions are finally answered but the "edge" is still there and i think even if we get to know all the background information, it won't take any suspense out of it. It's already 2013 bit i still kind of hope there will be more because the story is really good and it would be a shame if it just ends here
  14. oh YES!!! finally a story I can fall in love with^^ right now I'm going through the vampire genre and I've waited for a chapter to just capture me and hold on tight ( well it is about vampires afterall XD (no really I've seen the pun only AFTER I've wrote it down )). This one did it right away and I will wait impatiently for every new chapter, that I can promise you <3
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