Miles Long
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Even though I adore Luke, Seth would be good for Rory. Thanks for creating such awesome characters.
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Even though I adore Luke, Seth would be good for Rory. Thanks for creating such awesome characters.
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I think Seth might be the most misunderstood character in this whole story. Continued gratitude for the superior story.
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That eviscerating feeling of rejection comes through beautifully. Rory is just a ball of angst perfectly primed for something good to happen. Thank you for such thoughtful work.
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Things that mean nothing
Miles Long commented on DomLuka's story chapter in Things that mean nothing
Aaron is just an A-Hole. Now that Rory really understands it, he can move forward. I love the twist that Seth was mad because his attraction to Rory. Super storytelling. Thank you. -
I think Rory is about to learn that Aaron brings the worst out in people. Fun chapter, thanks.
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Methinks now that Aaron's true colors have come out, Rory can no longer ignore all the offness he's been feeling about Aaron. Chivalrous move on Seth's part. THANKS!
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Again Luke shows us his spectacular, spectacular. I love this story, thank you.
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If I liked Aaron I would maybe consider his point, but since I don't I think his attitude is irritatingly manipulative and that Seth despite his own prickly demeanor is right. However, Seth in also naïve in thinking Rory would take his word over Aaron's after the way Seth's been treating Rory. Great teen drama, thanks.
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Rory and Eddie just can't get a break, which makes Luke's support that much sweeter and Jase such an enigma. The character dynamic is just inspired, thanks.
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Petty annoyances and a silent celebration
Miles Long commented on DomLuka's story chapter in Petty annoyances and a silent celebration
Luke is the ultimate in awesome person. Nice work, thank you. -
Argh! Why isn't Rory paying attention to the signals that Aaron is sending out? Remember Luke's advice about being a liar??? Fantastico 5000 work, thank you.
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I was wondering when Tiffany was going to find herself in the family way again. New players to the CAP universe are always a welcome development. Super glad that Brad called JJ on his shitty behavior, although I think JJ has a good point about Brad's lack of involvement. Finally, I am metaphorically dancing in the streets that Matt's negative and in a good place with Wade. Thanks for all the great work.
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Brilliant chapter with the perfect balance of naval action and people drama. Thank you for making a grand day grander!
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Rory is in a bad spot, but I hate that he ignores the red flags where Keslin is concerned. Your work kicks ass DomLuka.
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I Can't Believe You Made Me Do That
Miles Long commented on DomLuka's story chapter in I Can't Believe You Made Me Do That
I backed into a car when I was learning how to drive so I empathize with Rory completely. Sometimes friends hold hands... . Thank you for all the great work. -
Luke is just plain awesomeness rolled into a package of adorable. Aaron is a manipulative brat, but I can understand Rory's attraction even though I'm totally of Luke's opinion. Fine work DomLuka, thank you.
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FINALLY! Seriously good writing, thank you.
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It's amazing how alike Eddie and Rory really are; besides being gay, they both suffer from avoidance and are a little wishy washy. Another fabulous chapter, thank you.
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So Rory has no gaydar, and Aaron had to point out the obvious...this doesn't make getting involved with Aaron a good idea. Brilliant revelation, thanks.
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"If it were possible to trade ten years of my life for one more minute with her, I wouldn’t hesitate." No mother worth a damn would ever take take that trade, but it's awfully sweet of Rory to think that way. Aaron seems to be the sort that likes the chase; which only adds to his general assholishness. Too bad he will forever be Rory's first kiss. Wonderful work, thanks.
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Alice is piece of work . Another fantastic chapter, thanks.
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Masterful twist that unfortunately only adds to Rory's ire instead of alleviating the grief. Awesome story, thank you.
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Rory has a right to his anger and while I think he's being petulant I remember what it was like to be 16. Reason isn't any one's strongest suite at that age. Nice reconciliation between Luke and Rory. Thank you.
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I love end of weekend surprises! Thank you. I'm glad that Wade is starting to come out of the Alex fog; I struggle with that coupling for more reasons than boring sex. I wonder if the prospect of Matt being sick helps put things into perspective for Wade. I am proud of Matt for being frank with Wade about his feelings and got a kick that they decided that they were even. While it's a naïve gesture because two wrongs don't make a right, it was equalizing in a very Matt/Wade romantic kinda way. Lark calling Brad out for being long winded is too funny. It's funny how even the the story is in flux...the characters seem to be really coming into their own, priming them and us for the next great CAP dramatic snare.
