Miles Long

Luke should have told Rory why rather than just throwing the number away, but hey hindsight is usually 20/20 . Love the work, thanks.

This is not my first or even second read of this story, but it doesn't matter because every times read this chapter I get sucked right into Rory's angst, Eddie's awkward anticipation, Jase's pique at Eddie and Luke's all around sensual adorableness just like I did the first go around. Fantastic work, thank you.

As much as I love Wade, reading his perspective leaves me feeling a little disappointed that he is so caught up in the thrill of Alex that he is ignoring his own needs and desires. If he can't be honest with Alex with out fear of feeling like a slut how will it work out? Do any of Alex's friends even know about him being bisexual? I'm also not sure sleeping with Matt is such a hot idea. I get why, I just am not sure it's good for Matt. Awesome work, thanks.

This story just keeps getting better and better. Thank you!

Well shit that news sucks out loud. As much as I love Wade he should know better than to provoke Will even if I think Will sticks his nose in places he shouldn't, but he is truly his father's child. Thanks for the work; I'm going crazy for more.

The Brad and Will volatile thing is now just kind of sweet. I look forward to the day Will has his own kids and realizes that parents sometimes see their kids through this filter that superimposes images of their kids at younger stages, birth, first words, steps, etc. it's natural to want to protect one's kids, and fighting that urge to allow kids to become their own person is a struggle. Brad has gotten a lot better, but Will won't realize that until faced with it himself. I'm wary about the Cam situation, I think Matt is underestimating his desire to connect on a deeper level. He's not the same sleep with everyone he can jock he was a short time ago and may just end up finding he cares for Cam a bit more than he thinks. Love your work, thank you.

Caroline's actions make her seem more like Granger's eldest brother's wife, and that's what makes me curious, are there forces we don't yet know about that are making Caroline act so out of character? It now seems her actions weren't of wanton lust and a calculation to gain leverage for something. Despite her dickish behavior to Cavendish, I can't write her other redeemable qualities off so easily. What's is going on in that head of yours Mark Arbour? BTW least arousing threesome depiction ever...good job (I think ). Thanks for the update!

Caroline's actions make her seem more like Granger's eldest brother's wife, and that's what makes me curious, are there forces we don't yet know about that are making Caroline act so out of character? It now seems her actions weren't of wanton lust and a calculation to gain leverage for something. Despite her dickish behavior to Cavendish, I can't write her other redeemable qualities off so easily. What's is going on in that head of yours Mark Arbour? BTW least arousing threesome depiction ever...good job (I think ). Thanks for the update!

Disappointing development about Kevin and Cody, but what causes me the most consternation is that Brad wasn't aware that Alex Danvers was positive. Implying either AD wasn't forthcoming with Robbie and Brad or Robbie and AD weren't honest with Brad. I struggle with Robbie being that careless given how much he truly cared for Brad despite his wanderlust. This revelation further adds more suspicion to my already shaky opinion of Alex Danvers. Thank you again for all the awesome work.

This dalliance with Alex seems a bit rushed on Wade's part. I get they are attracted to one another, but they are setting up house pretty quickly. And while I'm inclined to like Alex because of his heritage, I've also learned that just because one has good relatives doesn't mean they will be good people. Matt handled the break like a champ; and I'm crossing my fingers for him and Wade as well. Thanks Mark Arbour for the twist; I didn't even guess heartbreak was the package JP received.

It's comforting to know that despite Granger's status and position, he still values the advice of his father, and that his father listens and offers sound guidance. As piqued as I am with Caroline; I still fancy her enough to want to read her side of the story. Thank you for the work.

A chapter so fast it beat my normal check in schedule. I was moved by Matt's mini catharsis and how everyone rallied around him, especially Will and Brad. If I can't have hot JP action I will settle for sage JP action, thank you. Cautiously optimistic about Wade's change of heart...so looking forward to more. Awesome work, thanks.

The CAP universe has quite a bit of juicy drama spiraling around it with Wade's attraction to Alex, Kevin and Cody's junk and the ever present concern that Zach and Will are going to explode as situations in Zach's life change. It's odd that no one seems to think that Will might be the one who ultimately causes the first hiccup in the Will-Zach love story. Thanks for the work.

Whoa...did not expect the Cavendish twist in the Treadway revelation. So now what's with Arthur (yeah for me on getting his name right this time, I hope ). Happily stunned by the Arbour Awesomeness, thanks.

Interesting chapter all around. Kevin's ire concerns me since he's one of my favorite peripheral characters and Cody, well as much as I love him, his relationship with Danvers is bothersome (although I am biased because I never liked Danvers because I think he's a home-wrecker ). Alex Granger seems to have a lot of potential that I look forward to reading about. Thanks for the chapter.

I love when worlds collide and having your two universes intertwine has potential for brilliance. Thanks as always for sharing that brilliance.

Lovely way to resolve the King's disappearance. I'm surprised Caroline hasn't been forthcoming. Last chapter her excuse was she didn't want to get into it before meeting with the King, what's the reason now? And why are Freddie and Arthur avoiding George? I miss Cavendish dearly. Fine work, thank you!

I finally fixed my technical issues so I can like and review Mark Arbour's latest gift of awesomeness. First off thank you for not having Tony hit on Will. I feel bad for Mason because I think he can do A LOT better, but if he's keeping Tony occupied I'm a happy little hummingbird. Brad and Sean just keep getting more yummy; although I wonder what Childers will bring into the mix more from a professional opportunity with his new business than anything else, but if hot steamy passion erupts. . . His wife seems like a boor though. Matt keeps coming into his own, which is great to read and I find that I like Wade with this new Matt a lot better than the old Matt (I am all about team Wade). Really great chapter especially after a grueling trip to the bowels of NY. THANK YOU!

Fred Hayes senior was really a jackass. Brad and Sean sounds like a dreamy connection, really dreamy. Okay Will and Tony are good can Tony now fall off the face of the earth? Thank you times a million for the continued quality story.

Phew George is back and with Cavendish and Alfred potentially avoiding him my curiosity is on high alert. What's up with Caroline and where is the King? More, more, more, please. Great chapter, thanks.

Of the many stupendous Mark Arbour chapters this one kicks major ass. Having Matt help him navigate the situation is a great choice, and good for Will for finally letting the wisdom seep through some of the teenage snark. Thanks again for all the great drama.

Buzz is a fantastic addition to the TPC and a complimentary match to Jed. This story was a compelling continuation of the original and could have been much much much much longer (gentle nudge for book three ). Kidding aside thank you for sharing your awesome universe with all of us.

Wait it's over already?

It's good at least one of the Alpha couple's parents isn't a complete jackhole. Thanks for the chapter.

Thanks for another feel good chapter.