Miles Long
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I would say "Aww" but I think it would come out as UGH, because I think Tony is a selfish, hypocritical prat and Will could do sooooooooooooooooooooooooo much better. It was pretty romantic, I'll begrudgingly grant Tony that (and it's giving me a migraine to even do that ).
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Will, my young friend, given your family sometimes resolves personnel issues (i.e. Carson) and familial discourse (i.e. Brian) in a somewhat drastic and permanent manner, when talking to the police, in any capacity, it is important to remember the first rule of Fight Club. Don't talk about Fight Club. It's relevant advice given the movie was released in '99 based on the book which was published in '96ish. $55k a month and Hank's still scheming for $3 mil for a house...seems a little gold diggery to me.
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Shame on Marie and John. Their actions luckily don't diminish the joy at finding JJ in a good place. Hank the cop, Jeanine sure has varied tastes.
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Will's super awesome philosophy about not being responsible for others breaking their commitments is going to earn him ass kicking after ass kicking. I'm not saying it's right but scorned lovers rarely blame their unfaithful partners, they blame the other party. It's just human nature. Fun start. It's nice to re-read the non traumatic bits of this story.
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Of all the CAP installments I have to credit this one with having the most action, story lines, and intensity. The dichotomy of Wade's collected, thoughtful POV with Will's passionate and dramatic perspective really gave the story a jagged sort if balance that kept things moving at a compelling pace with a beautiful amount of tension. It's definitely in my top five CAP favorites. Thanks again Team Arbour for all your work and continued congratulations for the accolades this story has accrued.
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Chapter 100: Final Chapter
Miles Long commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 100: Final Chapter
I had a feeling that Jeff and Ryan were related...who knew penis shape was a trait passed down maternally . I too think that Scott would have turned out differently, since I was really surprised he turned out the way he did. Lovely chapter, thanks. -
Shane's suicide is heartbreaking because it seems he had no one he could turn to about the abuse he suffered. JJ's reaction is horrible and sad yet not surprising.
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I forgot how this chapter ends, and despite my reservations about how truly compatible Wade and Matt are at this moment I'm really rooting for them in spite of the odds against them.
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As much as I enjoy Will as a narrator, the high school,aspect of his life is not a captivating to me. It does read like he is a better fit for Menlo than H-W, but it could be that he's embraced it more than he did in Malibu. Thanks.
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Thinking back to when JP was an impulsive young man always makes me grin and feel very grateful that you have created this wonderful universe to get lost in periodically.
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Getting Jeff's back story was a treat. He's a great character.
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Go Matt...claim your man! Nice work, thanks.
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Will makes some great points and hopefully he can help restore some of Brad's moral compass. I would be worried about Michael and what he might try and pull.
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Honestly, this twist sounds more like a true accident, the universe doling out karma per se, than some nefarious set up. Interesting twist having the coach related to the family via the Shrink.
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All around good chapter, thanks.
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Underneath all the trampy, teenage angst Will is such an awesome guy. It was nice seeing JJ the kid we used to know for a little while.
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Pigheaded thy name is Robbie.
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Crapstix, well we now now what's going on with JJ? This would have come to light a lot sooner had Brad not been so quick to spirit Michael the pervy guard away.
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Someone like Brad would be good for Wade, not Brad though, although I also think someone like Wade would be really good for Brad as well.
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Great work Mark. You really know how to test the limits of unconditional love for both Brad and Will.
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I'm not getting the vibe that Noah's into Will in a romantic way, although I think he'd be a great fit for Will if he was.
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Wow! Wade and Brad. Wow!
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I'm a broken record, but Will will find another guy to rock his world if he would just get over king d-bag...although Robbie is gunning to take Tony's place as the d-bag king.
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Wow when Robbie F's it up he really F's it up; even Frank is pissed at him.
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This is the chapter where Robbie becomes persona non grata for me.
