Miles Long
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When JP finds out about this Martin will be lucky if he doesn't drown like Deke.
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I hope this smug self righteousness Robbie and Brad are feeling consoles them when they realize they've lost Will.
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When you fail someone to the extent that Brad and Robbie are failing Will and JJ, a missed alarm is a big deal, if that's really what happened...seems awful convenient.
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Man oh man is Carl ever a f@ing idiot.
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Product of politics or not Wade is a truly good guy...how it happened is a universal anomaly. On top of that Wade's right, Brad and Robbie are going down...omg...Wade's a shaman.
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Relieved Gathan is okay. Robbie and Brad were out of line and I'm afraid it's only gonna get worse because Brad and Robbie both suffer from the same pride affliction Elizabeth adman field does.
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Man Brad and Robbie just don't get it...the higher ground is the only ground to take as parents but they wanna fight with Will about everything, like they're kids themselves. I guess they were never really around, because toddlers are usually awesome at conditioning parents and preparing them for the years afterwards.
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Will fights like his father...this is gonna get so much uglier before it gets better isn't it?
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It's this chapter where Brad and Robbie start to fall in my esteem. The fact that they both seem to think that parenthood is this thing that can be put off as they pursue other goals paints them as hypocrites that care more about money than family. Money comes and goes but Will and JJ's adolescent hood is a gift (a tumultuous one at times that comes with no receipt) and it will be defined by their neglect.
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If Elizabeth was smarter than she is proud she'd give him the $25 mil and move on with her life. Too bad she's more proud than smart.
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Wade embodies a pretty impressive trifecta: smart, hot and rich.
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This is what I meant by not provoking Wade...I smell momma dearest all over this.
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Wade would make a great CEO; he such a natural leader and knows how to leverage the help of others.
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So we know this is bigger than just Carl...whose scheming now?
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Will and Brad are destined for trouble, but it's cool that when the shit hits the fan Will has JJ's back.
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Disappointed that Wade went there. I would have pegged him as a guy to block the deal and let the info that he was behind it flow through the channels just to give Carl more rope to hang himself.
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Brad's blowing it with Will.
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Wade you gave Matt every chance to participate in Riley. Matt was too wrapped up in Carl to bother. Hopefully, Matt gets it now.
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Carl's gonna get burned big time over this.
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Glad Matt accepted responsibility, I'm just disappointed that it took a Loma Prieta earthquake to shake the sense into him.
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Seeing as I've read this before, I would think that Elizabeth would want to avoid provoking Wade...but her arrogance is her Achilles heel.
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Wade makes a good looking millionaire.
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Matt has a huge hurdle to win back Wade and I'm not sure he's capable of giving Wade what he needs and I'm bummed that Wade is settling. Matt saved him in a way, but that doesn't mean they are meant to be...it just means that Matt has good qualities to offset his narcissism.
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Fun chapter, I loved the interchange at the end.
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This pace and tension is full throttle. I love Wade freed from the bonds of Matt.
