Miles Long
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Now that was truly a surprise, bravo!
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Smug and hypocritical, powerful cocktail.
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You must spend hours practicing juggling . Nice work, thanks.
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Thunderous applause for the chicane like plot. Thanks.
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Loyalty is earned as illustrated by Helen. Thanks.
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It's like a mini tornado is brewing and it's only chapter four. Thanks for the intrigue.
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Another delicious bite, thanks.
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How you so quickly introduce compelling characters and captivating story lines is a gift, thanks for sharing.
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Engaging start, glad to see Eric is as rascally as ever. Thanks.
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Thanks for the chapter. Matt doesn't realize because he's so focused on his own pain is how truly hard this is for Wade. It's great that Matt has his shit together NOW but it doesn't magically erase the pain he has caused and I think it's fair for Wade to try put distance between them, which is obviously incredibly hard given Wade keeps coming back to him. I think this is a case where Wade is maybe protesting too much and if Matt really wants Wade back, and this isn't a "I hate to lose" ego thing, rather than asking Wade how he can fix it it, Matt should take the initiative figure it out. If he can't or isn't willing then maybe he isn't as in love as he thought. Nice surprise ending, I like that the Hayes boys are gelling and Matt has Will's back.
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Bringing Wade into the universe is reason alone to give Bloodlines a big thumbs up. Even though the story for the most part was Matt's, Wade is who really stood out if or me. Thank you Mark Arbour for another great chapter in the CAP saga; you are truly gifted at creating compelling characters that easily suck readers in.
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Splendid ending to Matt's story; thank you for such a great HEA.
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Enjoyable tit for tat scene at the club, thanks.
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JP is the kind of father many people could benefit from. Moving chapter, thanks.
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Brian is a sorry little whore isn't he? Whist, jeez, dude grow up.
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Oh Stef...you are truly just enough! Fun chapter, thanks.
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First off thank you, a fresh Arbour chapter is always a highlight. Next, unexpected, yet delightful twist bringing Sean back to the CAP fold allowing Brad to show his inner thoughtfulness and give Sean and Ben their moment to explore that connection (I hope Will won't be too hard on Ben). Brad feels like he's on the verge of transcending some of his more questionable past actions and I find I am rooting for him.
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Wade's a pro, Jerry doesn't stand a chance. Thanks.
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Good chapter all around with Matt's parents coming to their senses and doctor Cody practicing his sexual magic.
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JP is good for the soul; Wade and Matt are lucky to have him.
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I was wondering when Matt's health would become an issue, good work, thanks.
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I don't believe she didn't know. I believe she didn't wanna know.
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Wade's on his way to being a political juggernaut!
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Matt's parents are so petty and not very careful. It's pretty sad.
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Petty but delicious payback.
