Miles Long

Max...don't be a prat. Marcel's a catch and you could use a guy who will treat you well. Thanks Mark for giving me fictional friends to talk to .

Marcel has a very confrontational approach, when it's addressing positive things it's great but it can also bristle people to have a mirror thrown in their face like that. Good writing, I am enjoying Marcel's POV quite a lot. Thanks.

Stef and JP are such a complimentary pair, as if they exist to keep one another honest. Kudos to JP for swallowing humble pie and making things right with Marcel. Shifting gears...Max, yay, yay, yay! It is this story that really turns me off Lark. Anyone who won't put Max on a pedestal needs to be evaluated for intellectual disabilities .

JP is blowing it behaving this way. He knows love isn't like that. Bad JP bad bad JP.

JP how can you be so brilliant and dumb at the same time? You have the strategic forethought to plan a revolution contingency and yet you punish yourself and Marcel by throwing up walls. Hurumphf. Great update, thanks.

I think the family we choose can often times make up for the shortcomings of the families we were given. Really nice work, thanks.

Right now I hate that JP and Marcel's paths can't be more congruous. I'll get over it but it sure sucks knowing a good thing is finite. Thanks.

Momentous start to this latest offering, by establishing what Marcel wants and giving it to him in a set time frame. Concise introductions to the other key characters, just enough to provide insight to those new to CAP, but not overwhelm established fans with repelling precious tales. Any character that sees JP's awesomeness is worth following. Thanks.

Man oh man is this an epic book in the CAP world; for only being 27 chapters it's intense. Brad has really come in to his own as a person and narrator bringing an aggressive and fun flavor to the series. It also heralds in so many pivotal and wonderful characters, Max (who is adorable and I wish he was straight and real so I could introduce him to my sister), Marcel (whom I seem to be the only one who likes), Lou, Janine (whose name I can't remember how to spell), Darius, JJ, and Will, and some baddies who we shouldn't forget like Jerk and Dr. French Creepy Guy. Thank you for turning Brad around for me, he's no JP or Stef but he's a worthy narrator. And extra special thanks for not taking JP away, story or not I would be devastated by his loss. Truly an exceptional series, thanks.

I have never had an affinity for this song, but after reading Man In Motion for probably the third time I can see it as a fitting and poetic beginning.

Welcome to CAP Will; you have an incredible adventure ahead of you. Robbie and Brad together forever or as long as Mark Arbour lets you . Thanks.

Marie's death was sad, but it pointed out just how connected and in tune with her family and towns goings on until the very end. RIP Marie. One part of the story I don't understand is how did Neil and Dr. Creepy French guy even meet? Re-reading the story there is nothing that I could find that makes that link plausible, convenient yes, plausible no. It's small and forgivable but it always stuck in my craw.

The very beginnings of Will , yay!

Brad's interest in Ben is a good thing; a nice salve to help work through his grief and maybe a new potential long term interest or maybe the right person at the right time to get Brad back on the horse again. If Matt wants to be with Wade Chicago is not the place to be, I wonder where else he applied. Thanks for another juicy chapter.

Robbie is very astute when he's not being a dorkamatic. I'm glad he came clean with Brad, and congrats on their commitment. Thanks.

Regardless of Robbie's guilt the case against him was bull crap. Way to go Marie for pulling out the family connections. Also, I love that Stef is an Angel from America.

99% gay. It's the 1% Brad let out to play when he was with Janeane. Thanks.

Is Robbie needing to be fisted because of the intimacy or because he feel like he should be punished? This is definitely a set back psychologically speaking.

Uh oh...I wonder what's really going on...JP and Stef will figure it out. Thanks for the thrilling tale.

Hornblower...I love names that are riddled with irony. Informative chapter and what a sweet gift from Cavendish. Thanks.

Jesus how did that little bitch Neil even afford a ticket to Paris?

Sometimes I wonder about these guys... .

Famous last words, Brad.

Oh Marcel...tsk tsk.

The best literary news ever! Thanks you for killing off JP.