Miles Long
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I forgot how much I really liked Cole. Top notch writing, thanks.
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Small thing but if Jeff was Frank's brother would that make Jeff Matt's great uncle rather than his cousin? Otherwise, nice chapter, thanks.
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It's sad Brian turned into such a little bitch. Gotta love the poor planning of practice starting before dorms opening. Fun chapter, thanks.
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Cody and Matt's timing could not be worse. Between school, their own individual natures and Brian, I'm not feeling super warm and fuzzy about them (a little hot and bothered maybe but no fuzzy).
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An exceptionally well written chapter beautifully integrating the other Matthew character. I cried like a baby too remembering what happened.
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Ah Tiffany sassy as ever. Great chapter, thanks.
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It's the small character details like JJ's awkward sweetness and Alejandro's loneliness that really makes this story stand out. Thanks.
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Cody is awesome, really awesome, but he and Matt are in too different places and frankly they are such kindred spirits I think they work better as friends. Really Brian? What happened to you, you used to be cool...kind of...at least not such a prick? Thanks.
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Dinner at Escorial is never dull. I wanna know what happened to Brian. Thanks.
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A crash course in the life and lore of Robbie. Matt's a lucky guy.
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L-O-V-E love it. Thanks.
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Maybe Wade needs to see Matt making a mature decision based on what's best for Matt's career to realize that Matt does have it in him to be a worthy partner for Wade. I do worry about Wade because he easily falls into unhealthy patterns of perceived obligations and Matt even with ALL his faults was a nice balance bringing out Wade's playful side. I'm proud of Will for stepping up and being the bigger man where Matt is concerned. Thanks as always for the work.
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Matt, Matt, Matt a sleazy porn store clerk, porn patron and a cop? It's kind of a dodgy day for you .
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There aren't enough words to describe how much I enjoyed the fact that Matt seduced JP and Stef, although I have to disagree JP is not dorky...he's adorable. Thanks.
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Excellent work capturing that almost apathy that can occur when something ends. I empathize with Matt's feeling of being done and ready to move on. Thanks.
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Surprise! You're adopted; good luck with those bum kidneys.
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Matt has been full of bravado from the beginning. Nice start to the latest CAP twist, thanks.
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If It Fits shares first place with the original CAP book for my absolute CAP favorites. Every story gets stronger and more refined but IIF in particular shines brightly with fantastic plots developments and characterization. It's a great read as a stand alone but also as a pivotal part of the larger series. Spectacular work Mark, thank you and your team for the dedication to the craft.
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Ahh what a beautiful ending to an awesome story. JP & Stef are just my favorite CAP couple. It's so nice to have them together, thank you.
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Brian is getting a whirlwind indoctrination. I hope he's taking notes.
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I love dinners at Escorial .
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JP doesn't run away from problems and he doesn't let people suffer to make his life easier, Stef knows this. Brian I wish we could capture this part of you and hold on to it forever!
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And we have our title . Thank you yet again.
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Thanks for the feel good chapter.
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Alejandro understands the JP family dynamic, protect the ones you love at all costs. Compliments on another fine chapter.
